Reviews for The Watcher
| filmtheory |
05/05/05 - 04:54PM |
11: 1.3 Ties that Bind: Act I |
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| The axe handle and Xander's car was a funny bit., as was the Brad scene. The line of the day was "Men like women who can breathe." I figured out who the female voice was (but not the male), but it was still a great cliffhanger. |
| filmtheory |
05/05/05 - 10:29AM |
8: 1.2 Training Day: Act III |
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| Xander muttering funny- classic Xander. Awesome action scenes. “That’s my girl” was hysterical. I love when characters repeat lines and they take on a different meaning the second time. Maya must be freaking out. Poor girl. I also liked the “You’re ready” at the end of the fight. Good stuff. |
| rockangelz25 |
05/05/05 - 09:13AM |
42: 1.10 Bloodlines: Act IV |
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Yea. Lots of action, and I really like the demonic connection bit. Kind of curious if Spike's sticking around, but hey, whatever. The whole thing was great overall. I am kind of curious what'd happen to Drusilla after the warning.... Great "episode" overall. I love them, and can't wait to see more.
Author's Response: Sorry, Spike had to blow out of town as well. He just didn't want to offer Angel a ride. |
| redmoon |
05/04/05 - 10:34PM |
35: 1.9 Grief: Act I |
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Brilliant! "Oh, right in the nose job." You know just how to add the fav characters (I need to work on mine a little). Good work!
Author's Response: Glad you liked the "nose job" line. I have to admit I got a kick writing that one.
And what are you talking about your stories needing work with the addition of characters? I'm still kicking myself for not coming up with the whole "Xander-chopping-off-the-heads-of-chocolate-bunnies" thing first! |
| redmoon |
05/04/05 - 10:22PM |
35: 1.9 Grief: Act I |
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Holy sprinkler system! (very Constantine). She kissed him, now he's dead, and I expect she'll have to kill him again. This will make for interesting shrink-talk later in her life.
Author's Response: Honestly? Never saw the movie or read the comic book. Guess I better add a disclaimer before Alan Moore sues my ass. |
| GPN |
05/04/05 - 02:45PM |
42: 1.10 Bloodlines: Act IV |
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| Great episode! I'm really liking this story, keep it up! |
| redmoon |
05/04/05 - 09:17AM |
32: 1.8 Homecoming Hell: Act II |
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Looking good. "mmm... feet." Keep excellence-machine crankin'.
Author's Response: Of course the quote above begs the question: "Exactly how does Jordy know what feet tastes like?" Unfortunately this is a mystery that will not be explored in this series. |
| rockangelz25 |
05/04/05 - 08:58AM |
39: 1.10 Bloodlines: Act I |
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Loved the first act..... Cannot wait to read more. I like the way that you brought in Angel.... And Spike..... And can't wait to see what happens in the next three acts.
Author's Response: Glad you like it so far! Let me know what you think of Drusilla and the fight scene between Angel, Spike and Brad. |
| daedreams |
04/26/05 - 04:04PM |
38: 1.9 Grief: Act IV |
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Yeah! This was a good one - love that you bring the characters back like that. And making Brad into the Big Bad is great. Can't wait to see how you write Drusilla (she's always been a challenge for me and my new story has her in it).
Thanks for the great story!
Author's Response: I have to agree that writing for Drusilla is not easy. She's a tough nut to crack. She'll be around for a while, so you'll have to let me know what you think of her. |
| rockangelz25 |
04/19/05 - 09:27AM |
34: 1.8 Homecoming Hell: Act IV |
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Hey. It was another awesome group--it's a little sad that Brad was (possibly) almost reaching some kind of maturity (beyond the basic "cheerleader good, Liv weird" thing), then got killed off. I'm more curious about what's going to happen when Liv finds out what happened. The whole thing was great--really can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response: Thanks for all the reviews! I'm already working on the next "episode" and should have it up by next week. |
| daedreams |
04/17/05 - 02:57PM |
30: 1.7 Hair of the Dog: Act IV |
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Finally finished all episodes - this it the best one yet! Your twists and turns are amazing. Cousin Jordy - how perfect is that. Can't wait for a werewolf to play a more crucial roll (unike on Buffy, since Oz couldn't control when he changed). You've got to keep this going as long as you can. You have me completely hooked. You write Xander so well!
Author's Response: Glad you like Cousin Jordy! I've just finished the next episode last night, so you can get an idea of how he'll fit in with the rest of the odd squad.
I'm little over half way with my storyline at the moment. If you like the twists and turns so far, I'm pretty sure you'll like where I go with this. Whether or not I have a second "season" depends on the time I have on hand and how many story ideas I can come up with. |
| tamzinrose |
04/14/05 - 02:28PM |
30: 1.7 Hair of the Dog: Act IV |
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AWWWW!!!! You ROCK!!! Thanks SO much! Love it! It's so GREAT!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the name and for reading my stuff. |
| redmoon |
04/10/05 - 10:11PM |
25: 1.6 Solo: Act III |
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Brilliantly funny. "Is it (punch) the sound of (punch) your own (punch) voice?" I can see the Vizier slowly losing bits and pieces of himself until he's mostly stump and pegleg. Good job!
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks for all the reviews. Glad you are enjoying the Vizier. I've based him loosely off of Principal Snyder, who imho, was probably the best enemy Buffy and Co. ever had. |
| redmoon |
04/10/05 - 10:04PM |
24: 1.6 Solo: Act II |
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| I'm loving the Vizier, he so classically wicked, I could see him rubbing his hands together in a very... dastardly way. Reading the next Act right now. |
| redmoon |
04/08/05 - 10:42AM |
23: 1.6 Solo: Act I |
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| Loving the new episode. "Moose to squirrel, come in squirrel": I nearly cried. ^_^ Keep it up. |
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