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tamzinrose 05/18/05 - 11:40AM 50: 1.12 Oraculum Caecus: Act IV Signed
Are you KIDDING? IF I'm interested? Of course I'm interested! We're all interested! I love this story! It is perfect! You are a total genius! I bow down at your feet and worship you! Get working on Season 2 before your mojo takes a holiday!

Author's Response: So.. uh... did you like the story or what? lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm knocking some ideas around for the next season. We'll see where it goes.

redmoon 05/16/05 - 06:34PM 46: 1.11 Sacrifice: ACT IV Signed
I'll be the first to admit I love a good cliff hanger, and this is the Stallone of all cliffhangers. This would be one of those episodes where you're shouting at "Executive Producer Joss Whedon" all sorts of threats and words not used in mixed company. Great build up. Can't wait for the ending. P.S. Good job in the award!

Author's Response: Wow! High praise indeed. Even if it did involve foul language and threats of bodily harm. I wouldn't evoke the name Joss Whedon again or I'm going to get a big head.

redmoon 05/16/05 - 06:26PM 45: 1.11 Sacrifice: ACT III Signed
Wow! Glad the odd squad had a plan B this time (of course, explosives are good as any part of a plan). "Not a Milton Bradley fan?" Nice! Reminds me of "Another Monopoly related assault. How do those Parker brothers sleep at night?" Can't wait to see what happens next! (For a minute there, it looked like Xander was going all Kamakazi)

Author's Response: Yeah, as I was writing the series, I suddenly realized I haven' t done a lot of property damage. Explosions seemed necessary at this point.

"How do those Parker Brothers sleep at night?" lol

redmoon 05/16/05 - 06:03PM 43: 1.11 Sacrifice: Act I Signed
I like your use (and previously your explanation) of Caleb. Her certainly was the picture of zealotry. I hope Xander doesn't end up all Joycey. Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! I don't think I'll be killing Xander... yet. Still working on the next episode, so anything is possible.

redmoon 05/16/05 - 05:40PM 41: 1.10 Bloodlines: Act III Signed
Again, brilliant. I can't get over your expert insertion of comic relief. "They're on to us Mugsy." And Pongo huggin Angel? Priceless. You've done an excellent job of reintroducing the original characters and integrating them: I especially like the way Jordy continually slams the door in everyone's face. Good job!

Author's Response: I think out of all the original characters, with the exception of Xander of course, I think I had the most fun with Spike and Angel. Glad to hear that Pongo amuses! Angel just seemed to be the right person to hug.

filmtheory 05/16/05 - 03:51PM 15: 1.4 Must be Tuesday: Act I Signed
Another great beginning to an ep. Lucy and Liv's interaction at the get go was awesome. Xander's way to get Lucy cleaning more dishes was hilarious. Dawn in black leather pants just seems wrong, but I suppose it's still more low key than some stories involving her. I loved Xander repeating the "must be Tuesday" line.

Author's Response: I guess I should have written in the bit about Dawn stealing from Buffy's wardrobe... Kidding. Nah... Dawn is older here, but as usual is the cause of all problems slayer when she is around. Must have something to do with being an interdimsional key. Thanks for the review!

filmtheory 05/16/05 - 03:46PM 14: 1.3 Ties that Bind: Act IV Signed
I liked the conversatin between Lucy and Xander. Their characters really seemed to be growing closer. I also loved Xander asking "Did she make it?" I knew who and what he meant right away. It was very touching.

Author's Response: I think out of all the scenes I've written so far for Lucy and Xander, I like that one the best. Glad you liked the Anya reference. I wasn't sure if I was hitting the cheese factor at that point, so I'm glad to hear you liked it.

redmoon 05/16/05 - 03:46PM 38: 1.9 Grief: Act IV Signed
Alright, go Dru!! You do an excellent Giles. I hope he hangs around, plus I'm glad he and the Xand man made up. Keep up the magic!

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked Giles, unfortunately he didn't stick around. However, Dru has her own insane things to do around town.

filmtheory 05/13/05 - 12:49PM 13: 1.3 Ties that Bind: Act III Signed
Great chapter. Liv knowing Portugese was awesome. I also liked Cordy and Doyle with beer and popcorn. But the ultiamte stroke of genius was the cause of Xander's problem. Awesome! Very psychological. I love it.

Author's Response: Yeah, that Liv's a little smarty pants, isn't she? Glad you liked Xander's little therapy session with Cordy and Doyle. It won't be the last time he needs a little help.

As for Cordy and Doyle having beer and popcorn? I was really tired and didn't feel like writing a fight scene.

daedreams 05/12/05 - 05:45PM 46: 1.11 Sacrifice: ACT IV Signed
Wondered when Buffy and Faith were going to make an appearance - good job, and right at the end, too (just like Giles at the end of Two to Go). You're writing Dru well - short little phrases, but that's all she needs to get the point across. And poor Xander! That'll teach him to be couragous - save him soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Glad you like Dru. Writing for a crazy person is a lot harder than I thought it would be. Save Xander? hmm.. I'll have to think about that one.

tamzinrose 05/12/05 - 03:14PM 1: 1.1 Destiny's Path: Act I Signed
How can you do this to me? You are so cruel. I am weeping. Cliffhangers. Get me every time. You rock!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!

Author's Response: For some reason my "Maniacal laugh" got edited out of my last response. Oh well.

rockangelz25 05/12/05 - 09:58AM 46: 1.11 Sacrifice: ACT IV Signed
NO!!!! You are a cruel person. Suspenseful cliffhanger. I loved the "epsiode" overall. It's great that they did manage to rescue Lucy..... And Dru gets all the Wolfram and Hart oriented Important Vamps, doesn't she. Is it a vibe or something?.... Loved it, cannot wait for the next one.

Author's Response: Glad you liked the episode. I was feeling particularly evil when I wrote the cliffhanger and was hoping for that kind of response!

filmtheory 05/05/05 - 04:57PM 12: 1.3 Ties that Bind: Act II Signed
A lot of plot development and a great cliffhanger. Awesome!

filmtheory 05/05/05 - 04:57PM 10: 1.3 Ties that Bind: Teaser Signed
GREAT TEASER. The co-workers phasing in and out was creepy and ominous. I liked it slightly better when I thought it was a waking dream, but the cheese man made up for it. This is especially true since what he said king of fit what the cheese meant in Xander's dream ifrom "Restless." I'm really hooked and wondering what the dream is saying. Great job.

Author's Response: Glad you liked the teaser, I had a lot of fun writing it. The "dream" doesn't have a lot of meaning for just this episode, but it does some foreshadowing for the other episodes.

filmtheory 05/05/05 - 04:55PM 9: 1.2 Training Day: Act IV Signed
Council pays for home damage- LOL. The Consul is creepy. Keep it up.

Author's Response: I'd hate to be the Watcher's insurance agent, but after all the damage that happened to Buffy's home over the years, I figured that the first thing she would do when she and Giles took over the watcher's council would be to implement an insurance policy on slayers' homes.

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