Reviews for The Watcher
| zman |
08/21/05 - 06:56PM |
1: 1.1 Destiny's Path: Act I |
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Terrific work, and the best idea for a continuation of the BuffyVerse I've seen yet. Your protrayal of Xander is great, please continue as long as the Muse strikes you.
Author's Response: As long as people keep reading and I don't run out of ideas, I'll keep writing! Thanks for the kind words! |
| Fred |
08/19/05 - 08:13AM |
1: 1.1 Destiny's Path: Act I |
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I've just finished this reading this and I love it! you introduced the new characters so well it was lke they were always there! I'm about to start season 2 but what is it with you people and perminatly blinding Xander!!! people just dont want him to have full use of even one eye!Though I like my Xander able to see but if it furthers your plot you could make all the characters blind and I'd still love it!!!
Author's Response: I love it when people read this episode. It just fills me with such evil glee!
So I can make all the characters blind? *Evil Laugh* What a great idea!!! |
| faith_slayer89 |
08/13/05 - 10:45PM |
50: 1.12 Oraculum Caecus: Act IV |
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Oh God, this was officially the best fanfic I've ever read. All the references to the original show, the original characters cropping up, the new characters and just everything was so amazing. I can't believe I waited this long to read it. But the good thing about that is now I can start in on Season Two without a wait. :) You are officially one of the greatest writers on SFA, and there are no words that can describe just how great this story was. This is so on my Favourites. :)
Author's Response: Wow... Thank you so much! I'm so glad you like it. You officially made my day. |
| axel |
08/08/05 - 01:24AM |
48: 1.12 Oraculum Caecus: Act II |
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AHHHH, DAMN! well, Good story, um, I rellay enjoyed this chapter of Kill Bill, I mean the Watcher. I don't think Xander liked it to much though.
Author's Response: Hey!! I was watching plenty of kung-fu-rip-the-eyes-out-of-people's-sockets movies before Kill Bill came along!! LOL!
Sorry I didn't kill Andrew, but he'll get his one of these days. |
| axel |
08/08/05 - 01:07AM |
47: 1.12 Oraculum Caecus: Act I |
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| Sorry, but I'm glad clem is dead (told you I was mean) Strange that liv seems to care more for xander than Buffy (yes, I know save the world, but she acts like he's just a choir she's to buys for) Any still a good story, by the way, could you kill Andrew to? |
| filmtheory |
08/06/05 - 11:56PM |
19: 1.5 That Old Familiar Feeling: Act I |
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Awesome, awesome, awesome idea for an episode. I love everyone coming onto Xander. The three spells that have gone so far are great and now that the 4th has hit him, they'll have a hard time breaking it. This is SOOOO good.
Author's Response: I had a lot of fun with this episode. When I was researching for the story I was amazed how many curses, hexes, thralls and accidental spells were cast on the poor guy. |
| axel |
07/26/05 - 12:42AM |
38: 1.9 Grief: Act IV |
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A whole group of people, as strong as Caleb, and Dru's there to, There screwed! Great Chapter.
Author's Response: Oh you have no idea how screwed they will be!! |
| axel |
07/26/05 - 12:32AM |
36: 1.9 Grief: Act II |
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Great chapter, The door scene was hilareis. By the way, when Liv made the comment about her dad, did anybody else want her mom to smack her, or am I just mean?
Author's Response: You? Mean? Nope! I was aiming for an angry girl lashing out at everyone and totally crossing over lines she shouldn't be. Glad to hear she ticked you off. (I know... How weird is it to say that?) I got A LOT of mileage out of that door bit. I still chuckle when I review that scene though... |
| Buffymanic |
07/19/05 - 02:16PM |
10: 1.3 Ties that Bind: Teaser |
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Oh yes the cheese guy!!! thats was brillient. It was a really nice slow + creepy way to get you into the episode, it may just be a dream but I was loving it!
Author's Response: I always liked that dream sequence. It was inspired by the whole Restless/Twin Peaks dream sequences which were some of my favorite episodes. It also foreshadows the rest of the "First Season", so be on the look out for the references. Glad you liked it! |
| filmtheory |
07/18/05 - 04:42PM |
18: 1.4 Must be Tuesday: Act IV |
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The X-man finally gets some lip service and the good guys live ha[ppily ever after. 'til next Tuesday anyway. Good ending. It definitely has me excited about the next episode.
Author's Response: I have to say that of all the episodes, this one is my favorite followed by the next episode. Can't wait to see what you think. |
| Buffymanic |
07/18/05 - 09:18AM |
4: 1.1 Destiny's Path: Act IV |
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wow this is fantastic!!
I really love how you've expanded what we already know + had an inkling about into a spin off that totally kicks ass.
I love Lucy + Liv bother amazing characters + funny too. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. Always good to hear that my story ideas and OC's kick ass. |
| filmtheory |
07/14/05 - 04:40PM |
17: 1.4 Must be Tuesday: Act III |
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Another greta chaptee. The Vizier cracks me up. Willow's banter was awesome. You have Willow down perfectly. Definitley her personality and way of talking came through. The one thing that would've been neat that wasn't there is if Willow wasn't ewwwed by the throw up. I can kind of see her being like "Ah. The pre-fight vomitting. Good times." But you create so many oppertunities for great jokes in your story even you can't take advantage of all of them. I'm dying to know what the 8-ball said to Lucy. I know sex is coming. I can feel it.
Author's Response: LOL! I hope you don't mind, but I liked your line so much I swapped out the "Ewww" for it.
As always thank you for reading and reviewing! |
| filmtheory |
07/13/05 - 02:18AM |
16: 1.4 Must be Tuesday: Act II |
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Poor Maya. Relegated to sidekick status. Dawn’s reaction to her predicament is actually very Xander. I love that she’s learning to wisecrack. The Vizier is creepy. And mean. Why’s he have to be so mean? Oh. Right. Villain. Never mind. I love Liv stepping up to the challenge. She rocks. Hopefully. Bonus point for Willow mentioning "resolve face."
Author's Response: I have to say that the Vizier is one of my favorite meanies in the series. When it came time to... Oh wait. You're still a season and a half behind. You'll just have to see what happens with him. |
| Kevin |
07/07/05 - 05:35PM |
1: 1.1 Destiny's Path: Act I |
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Of all the spinoff ideas I've seen, this is the first involving Xander. It's also one of the best. I think it's a brilliant idea, but you don't rest on the strength of the idea alone. Your execution is also first class. Great fic!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Glad you liked it. Hopefully you'll like the rest of the series... |
| axel |
07/06/05 - 12:41AM |
8: 1.2 Training Day: Act III |
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| The story just get's better. The charaters are still good, and the action is really picking up. |
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