Reviews for Walking in Fear
| Kevin |
06/28/05 - 01:31PM |
6: Five |
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Great story. I hope I'm not sick for saying this, but Dawn's scene in the club was actually kind of sensual. I suppose you were going for that, but I still worry I'm a bad man. So far, this is really, really good and I can't wait to read the rest.
Author's Response: Everyone thinks they're sick for liking that scene. I'm just glad everyone gets it. It's my substitue for a sex scene, as that might make a few more people sick, lol. Thanks for the review! |
| terry |
06/24/05 - 11:28AM |
6: Five |
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Another cool chapter. I really like this story and Dawn's quest. Each event is so mysterious, yet not so off the wall it makes me lose interest. I was kind of sad Dawn didn't let the vmap suck on her for a little bit. The scene you wrote in the bar was so sensual. Or maybe I'm just a sicko.
Author's Response: You're not a sicko... well, no more than I am. She gets another chance to feel the sweet bloody kiss later on, when withdrawl catches up to her. Thanks for the review! |
| axel |
06/14/05 - 12:38AM |
6: Five |
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I was glad the priest was helping her, then he just seemed to be crazy, by the end I just didn't know anymore. I liked this chapter, but what the Hell just happened?
Author's Response: Wethrin's a tricky guy. He only made a cameo here, but look for him also in Man With a Thousand Faces. As for what the Hell happened??-- Use your imagination. |
| Faith_5by5 |
03/22/05 - 08:22AM |
6: Five |
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