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Reviews for A New Dawn




redmoon 03/26/05 - 02:16PM 8: Future Plans Signed
Good conclusion, I like how you integrated Will's tendency to use memory inhibiting spells to save herself from bad situations. Keep up the excellent work.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it :) I loved writing it. It was my first fan-fic and I was a little worried about it, but knowing someone's liked it has made it worth-while. Thanks for reading it :) I'll return the favour.

redmoon 03/25/05 - 01:08PM 7: Return Signed
Excellent work. You've really captured Spike.

Author's Response: Thanks a bunch :) I'm glad you're enjoying it. I love writing Spike, he's such fun.

redmoon 03/23/05 - 09:57PM 6: No Matter What Signed
Good job! Love the resurrection precedent: exactly what Spike would do. Keep it up!

redmoon 03/22/05 - 03:37PM 5: Weary Watcher Signed
Good stuff! I love the idea of drunken Giles. Keep it up

Painbow 03/21/05 - 12:12PM 3: Consequences Signed
An interesting start to the story. Defiantely something Willow would do to solve things. I'm interested to see where you take this.

My only complaint plot wise is that after a week the Scooby gang wouldn't be this worried about Dawn's grief. They'd probably be more worried if she got over it so fast. When you lose someone close to you it can take months to get over it, and when you're still in sweats by month 2, that's when people start to worry. Honestly, Xander, Willow, and Tara would all still be grieving and recovering from their injuries.


redmoon 03/20/05 - 06:35PM 2: Forget Signed
Excellent start: Continue!!!

redmoon 03/20/05 - 12:55PM 1: 'I Miss You' Signed
Good start. Keep writing, don't forget the setting description.
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