h t t p : / / s l a y e r f a n f i c . c o m
s f a
m e n u

Reviews for Hell has cometh




xonara 03/19/05 - 02:44AM 1: Reunion Signed
Quite an interesting beginning, quite compelling. Another plus is that I only found two mistakes (breathe should be breath and pivital should be pivotal). Not being a hardass, just trying to make you the best writer you can be (I was an editor in a former life, ie: College!) With love, Xonara

Author's Response: Wow. Thanks. I'ol change those as soon as I can. And u aint being no hardass, your giving advice, which as I said, is helpful, as is critisism. And I bet I might not be as ood as you though. Or even angelsbabigurl. You guys, and soo many others, will alway be better than me. Thanks for the review. It really was helpful. Love Ashlee
s t a f f

Rave
Barbie Girl (Becca)
biscuit07
Filmtheory (Jim)
Malice (Jess)
MebbtheScribe (MichaelB)
Reset (Allie)
Shay (Marrisa)
somnambulist29 (Shea)
Stephanie Loss
Wendyness (Wendy)
Questions?Contact Us
a f f i l i a t e s


All stories on this site have been archived with the authors' consent. Do not copy these stories for your own uses without the express consent of the author themselves. Buffy the Vampire Slayer TM and Angel TM are © UPN, WB, Fox and its related entities. All photos on the site are © UPN, Fox, Warner Bros, and/or their respective owners. No profits are being made by use of these images.

Powered with the assitance of eFiction.