Reviews for Make It Better
| axel |
10/04/05 - 08:53PM |
2: Cookie Dough |
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so far, so good. Keep it up.
Author's Response: Thanks, for reading! |
| angelsbabigurl08 |
07/22/05 - 05:31PM |
2: Cookie Dough |
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Hilarious. Megan's, babysitters, counsins, mon's, daughter whatever. Hilarious.
Author's Response: Thanks!! |
| Rougue_Slayer |
04/03/05 - 08:01AM |
2: Cookie Dough |
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It's really cute...keep it going. I like it so far and want more. Make your chapters longer though. It will give you trouble later on and I'm gonna be the only person to tell you that.
Great job though.
Author's Response: Thanks....as you can see they've gotten longer! |
| rockangelz25 |
03/01/05 - 01:36PM |
2: Cookie Dough |
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I like it so far--the first two chapters were great. Poor Xander.... Set-up dates. Can't wait to see what's going to happen next overall.
Author's Response: I'm glad!! Keep reading |
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