Reviews for Love, Lust, and Life in L.A.
| rockangelz25 |
02/27/05 - 12:27PM |
5: Heartthrob, Pt. 1 |
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Wow--great chapter. It was definitely worth the wait, and homework tends to eat away time. I loved it--and I wonder what's going to happen with James, etc. this time around.
The Katherine parts (which were all of them were great)--wonder if the "forgetting" spell's going to backfire.
Um, two points (error-wise)--you mentioned that Buffy wasn't a very good Wicca, or something to that effect, and you said that Katherine was going to try and go back to Sunnydale in the afternoon..... When, I'm guess, you meant Willow and L.A.??? Just curious.
But, like I said, it was a great chapter overall, and leaves me eagerly waiting for more!!! Please update it again soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I remember the sentence you're talking about, and I actually did mean Buffy, not Willow. (Future) Buffy had made a potion for Katherine, but because the Slayer never practiced magick, the potion didn't come out good. Hopefully that clears up any confusion on that point. But thanks for calling me on the Sunnydale-L.A. point. That was a mistake, so I'll go fix that right now. ^_^ |
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