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| filmtheory |
05/04/05 - 11:35PM |
4: Capitulo Tres |
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Poor Angel. Xander’s right that he’d really hate Spuffy. I feel bad for him, even though I don’t really like Angel. But Danw’s right that Angel does kind of abandon her over and over. Then again, so does Giles. Okay, moving on. Great exchanges. The dialogue was really snappy. I loved the chapter!
Author's Response: I'm glad you loved the chapter, equally glad that the dialogue was good. And I know that Giles abandons them the same way that Angel does at times.... That may come into play later.... Yea, thanx for reviewing it again!!! Hope it stays enjoyable. |
| redmoon |
04/02/05 - 01:21PM |
4: Capitulo Tres |
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It certainly makes sense that there's some resentment about Dead Boy. D's protectiveness of her older sister is endearing. Tell there's no Dawnie/Oz brewing here. All in all; excellent!
Author's Response: Captain Peroxide does know what he's doing (I hope), so don't worry about that. I'm glad that you're liking it--and about the Dawnie/Oz, don't quite know yet. But thanx for all three reviews--I hope you keep liking it. |
| faith_slayer89 |
02/26/05 - 09:28PM |
4: Capitulo Tres |
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Hmmm, I'm getting the feeling here that you don't particularly like our friendly neighbourhood vampire with a soul (the original, I mean). Angel's one of my favourite characters, but looking at the chappie objectively, I'd say job well done.
Author's Response: Okay. Thanks for reading it and reviewing it--for a while there, I was beginning to wonder if it really sucked, and thus, no reviews. And it's not that I don't like Angel--but Dawn might not. I mean, she got pissed off enough about Riley, so how would she feel about the original guy to run out on Buffy and make her (Buffy's) life a near-hell? Not saying that he did, I'm just saying that Dawn might not favor him as much, because he was just one more guy that hurt her sister (in her eyes).
But--wow--thanx for all three of your extremely great reviews. I'm off to read your story. Hope you keep enjoying this one! |
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