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| redmoon |
04/02/05 - 01:01PM |
2: Chapter One |
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| Nice! I must say, I've had the same experience with IM conversations. Keep it up! |
| filmtheory |
03/28/05 - 11:23AM |
2: Chapter One |
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This does a really good job of showing the aftermath of the problems in "Between Apocalypses." I love that Dawn and Oz are e-mailing each other when they're only a floor apart. How very 21st century. Also, their screen names were hysterical.
Author's Response: Thanx. I'm glad you're liking it. Yeah--the emailing's pretty fun.... Also glad the screen names were funny. They were meant to be and all. Please keep reading/reviewing.... Also, here's hoping you still like it. |
| faith_slayer89 |
02/26/05 - 09:21PM |
2: Chapter One |
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Lol, the IM'ing between Oz and Dawn was funny. Like the beginning to this so far. There's only one sentence that's kinda confusing. Angel didn't try to make friends, and Spike seemed to avoid her. She would talk to him once in a while, but it just wasn't like it used to be. Could you explain that please, 'cause I don't get it. Did you perhaps mean Buffy instead of Angel? ...Anywho, 10/10 ^_^
Author's Response: No--I was meaning that Angel wasn't trying to make her like him really well, because she'd been so pissed off at him when he'd first gotten there. And with Spike avoiding her, they used to be good friends and all that. I was still talking about Dawn, and not Angel, with the "her" parts. Sorry for confusion--I'll try to fix that. |
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