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Reviews for Angel, Season 6




redmoon 04/08/05 - 09:29PM 7: 6.07: Recovery Signed
Ha! "He was only gone a week." Nice burn by Gunn.

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm worried about how I write Gunn. the problem is, after season 2, Gunn got on my nerves. I hate the way Fred turned him into a wimp. I actually thought Gunn and Cordy probably would've been a better match, but they went a different direction. Okay, end of digression.

redmoon 04/06/05 - 08:24PM 6: 6.06: Where Do We Go From Here? Signed
I love the picture you painted of the junkie life for the last several chapters. very Trainspotting. Your Xander is excellent. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks! i'm glad Xander worked. I don't feel like I writ ehim well. I'm hoping to drop in on the junky lifestyle every now and then. In the story, I mean.

rockangelz25 04/05/05 - 11:10AM 6: 6.06: Where Do We Go From Here? Signed
Glad to see Angel doing the father bit--equally glad to see Connor's going home. Good on Kat/Katie; getting rid of a "junky" and Mark. Another great chapter--update soon, please. Can't wait to see what happens when Connor gets home.

Author's Response: Kat/Katie might be around on again off again. I'm not sure yet. I wrote her pretty one-Kat/Katie might be around on again off again. I'm not sure yet. I wrote her pretty one-dimensional and not all her actions made sense as i wrote them, but I have this back story that kind of brings her actions together. Still, she's a minor character and I don't know that I want to spend too much time on her. With Angel's father bit, I really wanted to show how much Angel is willing to take responsibility for Connor's fall and how far he's willing to go to be with his son.

gumboy 04/05/05 - 09:16AM 2: 6.02: Help Signed
Ahh... Nothing like a little scooby vs fang gang quippy action. "Sharp as a basketball" I never thought about how the reboot would affect BTVS's chosen. All the characters are spot on. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad I have the characters down pretty well. I hope you keep reaidng. God knows this series needs readers- lol.

gumboy 04/05/05 - 06:31AM 1: 6.01: Home Again, Home Again Signed
The best way I can say this is.... Nice Reboot! I'll be interested in seeing how you handle the rest of the season.

Author's Response: Thanks! "Nice Reboot" is the nicest thing you could have said. I wanted to rewrite season 5 (and the end of 4) without just saying *poof* this is how I would have done it.

rockangelz25 04/04/05 - 08:44PM 5: 6.05: Lost Angels Signed
More greatness. Connor's spiraling journey continues, and leaves me feeling sorry for both Kat and Faith (Kat, not so much as Faith, but still a little). Loved the action with everybody else, though there wasn't so much of that and cannot wait to see the next chapter. More updating soon, please.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I think Connor will continue to spiral for a little. I'm pretty sure both Faith and Kat will recover somewhat, yet still have dents to their pride. I'm glad to know you like it. Thanks again!

redmoon 04/04/05 - 07:39PM 5: 6.05: Lost Angels Signed
I'm liking Darkconnor so far. It certainly seems like Angel deserves what's coming, at least in his own mind. Great chapter.

Author's Response: I like Dark Connor, too, so expect to see a bit more fo him. I don't think any father desrves to have his kid end up a dope fiend, but Angel certainly had a decent amount of input ineo thee situation. Still, I'm betitng these two crazy kids just might be able to get past that. Maybe.

redmoon 04/04/05 - 07:08PM 4: 6.04: The Way We Were Signed
Powerful juxtposition of dark and plucky: "(I'm nothing if not consistent)". I am interested to know how far C will take the heroine to find what he's looking fo, though I have some idea that if it's hell he's after... According to your responses, this isn't one of your most popular stories. I can't imagine why this is the case: I love it to bits. Keep it up.

Author's Response: Thanks as always. I wanted to do a kind of homage to “Spin the Bottle.” You can rest assured Connor is very much looking for hell on earth and will do his best to find it. However, I’m hoping not to keep this plotline running to long as most Angel fans hate Connor and will probably be cheering for him to OD. I’m glad you love the story to bits. I really do enjoy writing it and hope to keep it up. However, numbers don’t lie and this is by far my least read story. Thanks again!

redmoon 04/04/05 - 06:42PM 3: 6.03: That Darkness Signed
Superior writing! Somehow you managed to mesh a heart-to-heart with a rather violent fight scene: Well done! The continuity about Cordy's death is flawless and connecting the Hellmouth to the Key was nothing short of genius. I almost feel like a traitor to say this, but your version of Chosen makes so much more sense and brings things to a better conclusion than Joss Whedon's. Keep up the fantastic work!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and the compliments! The heart-to-heart during a battle for life and death is just me ripping off the series. I always loved how they’d have these typical conversations during fight scenes. I wanted to bring Cordy back, so I figured I needed a decent way to do it. Blaming W&H for her death seemed like the right thing to do. As for keying the hellmouth, Dawn has to be good for something, right? Thanks for the comment about me vs. Joss, but keep in mind he has budgets and networks to contend with. Thanks again so much for reading and for taking the time to share your thoughts with me.

Rougue_Slayer 04/03/05 - 04:50PM 4: 6.04: The Way We Were Signed
Oh. My. Goddess. Yeah, that pretty much sums it up.

Author's Response: Hope the story will continue to get this kind of reactin form you. Thanks!

Rougue_Slayer 04/03/05 - 04:50PM 4: 6.04: The Way We Were Signed
Oh. My. Goddess. Yeah, that pretty much sums it up.

Author's Response: Wow. Thanks :)

rockangelz25 04/03/05 - 11:29AM 4: 6.04: The Way We Were Signed
Great. I liked the perspective switching (Lorne/third person/Lorne/third person/etc/etc), and I liked the way that you told it. Once again, Connor sticks up for the girl in distress. I'm glad things are going well Angel/Cordy wise.... Kinda curious about Fred/Gunn wise. Hope Connor doesn't do anything too insane in his heroin daze. Great chapter again, and leaving me wanting more.... So, please (I repeat my mantra), update again soon.

Author's Response: I’m glad the perspective switching worked for the story. I didn’t want to do Sunny Redux with Connor, but there’s a direction I want to go and Naomi seemed the only way. Angel/Cordy will of course have their bumps. Fred/Gunn are probably done, but I’m not sure yet. Connor is just getting started with regard to the narcotics. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I like writing this story, but as I’ve mentioned before, it’s not my most popular. Anyway, I do hope to update again soon. Thanks again for reading.

redmoon 04/03/05 - 08:57AM 2: 6.02: Help Signed
I love your take on the last battle. It certainly makes more sense to have as much fire power in Sunnydale as possible than the way they discribed it in the series. I look forward to reading more.

Author's Response: Thanks! I, unlike Joss, am not hindered by salary budgets and network squabbling. So I got to throw all the major characters at the Hellmouth.

redmoon 04/03/05 - 08:29AM 1: 6.01: Home Again, Home Again Signed
Brillian, I love Illyria's very violent sense of humor. "Flesh blanket, check." No trouble at all suspending disbelief.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked Illyria. i always worry I don't write her well. Luckily, I have a dark sense of humor as well, so things like "Flesh blanket" come easily to me. I hope you keep reading.

Rougue_Slayer 04/03/05 - 05:41AM 4: 6.04: The Way We Were Signed
Awesome dialect, great character situations, I love it. Gotta tell you it's hella confusing. Way different from my version of what happened after the last episode(hint-hint). Great, though. update soon. please

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Was the story confusing in a good way or a bad way? Which parts were confusing?

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