Reviews for Running on Faith, Season Two
| Quortoth |
03/24/06 - 09:14PM |
14: 2.14: The Condors and the Bees |
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"Sing it on the mountain, brother."
That wasn't even the funniest part. Wow, that whole sex talk, whoa. It was hillarious. I thought it was great, wweee!! Great work there. Great.
Author's Response: I always worry that humor won't come off in writing, so I'm glad the sex talk was funny. I'd been waiting to write that for at least a year before I actually worked it into the story. |
| morbidnagel641 |
12/01/05 - 12:16PM |
14: 2.14: The Condors and the Bees |
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I love it. 'the-birds-and-the-bees' part cracked me up! You portrayed Lorne perfectly... "Hold this silly severed head of mine up to your sweet cheek, sweet cheeks" I love the way Connor senses Angel's presence.
Author's Response: I thought the "birds and bees" scene had the potential to be comic gold, so I'm glad I got a few laughs out of it. I'm also glad I got Lorne down. I always worry he's one of my weaker characters. Thanks so much for the review. I'm so psyched that you're enjoying the story. |
| Painbow |
03/29/05 - 02:20PM |
14: 2.14: The Condors and the Bees |
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"The talk" was PRICELESS. Connor getting upset, angry, and confused, Angel not knowing how to make it better and too embarrassed to try and be clearer, Faith making it better, and Condors. Hee! *g*
Author's Response: Connor as fish out of water is good for endless comic mileage. Of course, Angel is out of his depth here as well. However, the boys will eventually bond and have a heart to heart. If I have time. Condors, baby. It's all about the condors. |
| Michael J |
02/25/05 - 03:06PM |
14: 2.14: The Condors and the Bees |
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Condors. That one word made the whole chapter for me. I love how Connor just felt Angel's presence there. Their connection there is so palpable. I really don't have much else to say about this chapter. I get the feeling you used this to transition into later events, so I'm just left speculating where you want to take things. I'm a little nervous about how you write the Pylea stuff b/c the canon Pylea arc for me was one of AtS's lower points. As always, I look forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Glad you like condors! I'm definitely trying to build upon the connection between Angel and Connor. Hope I make Pylea exciting. I always thought the Pylea sequence got a bad rap, but my Pylea will be vastly different. I hope you enjoy it. Thanks! |
| always angel |
02/23/05 - 10:04PM |
14: 2.14: The Condors and the Bees |
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As always great chapter. The ''talk" with Connor was hysterical. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm so happy you liked the talk! I hope to post again soon. |
| Monkey Pants |
02/21/05 - 05:24PM |
14: 2.14: The Condors and the Bees |
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The chapter moved at a slower pace than its previous installments, which is good in a way as we need a breather after the constant delivery of plot-twists and action. The 'birds-and-the-bees' scene at first seemed a little out of place, but undeniably funny. Connor's innocence was a bit of a surprise...CONDORS? but worked well, I think, with Angel's awkwardness with being a parent figure. Maybe he should have left it to Faith... :) The spirit of Lorne, as ever, is captured really well. I could almost hear him singing from my computer...
Author's Response: I'm glad the slow pace didn't turn people off. The next few chapters will hopefully be more exciting. Angel/Connor awkwardness is a lot of fun for me, personally. Thanks for the comment on Lorne and the review in general. |
| rockangelz25 |
02/21/05 - 01:41PM |
14: 2.14: The Condors and the Bees |
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Great chapter again. I loved the parts with Lorne.... And "the talk" with Connor was hysterically funny. Poor Lorne--back in Pylea. And it's going to be kind of interesting to find out (if you include it) what kind of a government they have now exactly. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I had my doubts about this chapter, so I'm glad someone liked it. Poor Lorne. But he's home and happy now. Well, home anyway. I always thought the show missed hte boat by not having Angel give Connor "the talk." I mean, that's just a slam dunk. Yes, the goverment of Pylea will be very much a factor in the next chapter. |
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