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faith_slayer89 02/20/05 - 12:33PM 7: Till We Meet Again My Love Signed
Mmmm, I think this chapter could have been better. The diary entry, while I understand is supposed to reflect Buffy's thoughts and everything, is a bit repetitive. Plus it sounds like she's been pining away for Angel for 11 years. I mean, yeah, they're soulmates and all, but they met when they were five, I would think that being called as the Slayer would take precedence over Angel for the time being. I dunno. It just sounds like Buffy's been thinking only of Angel for the last decade and that doesn't sound quite like our Buffster. But it's your story. To each his own.

Author's Response: Yeah I agree with you totally on that. But that was how I wanted the chapter to be and stuff. Yes its a bit repitive that Buffy is only thinking about Angel all the time but this is an Alternative Universe fic and such. But don't worry the next chapter will be much better than this. For sure. but im glad you reviewed it either way. I really like to hear the readers thoughts on the fics both good and bad. the next chapter will be better than this hopefully but thanks for reviewing and reading it. You are entitled to your own opinions. Thanx
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