Reviews for Campus Life
| Quortoth |
12/18/05 - 12:16AM |
15: 12. Dead Week |
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Wow.
Author's Response: Thanks! |
| crayonbreaky gal |
01/29/05 - 04:44PM |
15: 12. Dead Week |
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That zombie making guy just will not go away. Connor needs to do something about him. I'm sure you have something planned. Great chapter again. Enough action with a sprinkling of exposition. I liked it that you showed Dawn's feelings and that she can't really explain them. And that there's an urgency to finding Connor and Emily before the sun goes down.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I really wanted that time pressure built in. Plus, when I got to boring parts of the Connor/Emily storyline, it was nice to have the "Gotta Find Emily!" storyline to cut to. Steven Radinsky is a bit of a pain, but we'll hopefully deal with him soon enough. |
| Revello1620 |
01/29/05 - 02:06AM |
15: 12. Dead Week |
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This was an amazing chapter, I loveed it to itty bitty zombie pieces :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I relaly liked writing this chapter, so I'm glad you liked it, too. |
| Michael J |
01/28/05 - 09:57PM |
15: 12. Dead Week |
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Yesh. On with the action!! Love this chapter. You did an excellent job of capturing the urgency of the situation with the full moon rapidly approaching. Apparently Emily's learning to tap into her strength, which goes a long way towards teaching her to control her changes, if she lives long enough (PLEASE DON'T KILL HER!!). Dawn is very much Buffy's sister in this one. Her explanation of why she likes Connor sounds just like Buffy's feelings for Angel when she was a teenager. "When I look towards the future, all I see is you." "When I kiss you, I feel like dying." It's all vomit worthy, but very teenager. Rosie and Bobby are an interesting pair. it hadn't occured to me until now that Connor needs a gang to call his own if he's really going to be the lead in this series. I can't wait for Connor to see ol' Radinsky again. I'm already expecting Steve to reanimate his dead brother at one point. The cliffhanger here, well I saw it coming a mile away, but I'm still hooked and anxiously awaiting your next chapter.
Author's Response: Glad you liked the action. I was really, really trying to capture the urgency of the situation, so I’m really glad that came off well. Yes, Emily is tapping her strength, which will be great for her . . . provided she lives long enough (as you said). Poor Connor really does need his own gang. But sadly, he won’t have one as long as he keeps insisting he wants no part in this world. I’m not sure which part of the cliffhanger you saw coming, but I’m glad you’re anxious for next chapter. I’m also glad, of course, you took the time to share your thoughts with me. Thanks! |
| frenchtoast101 |
01/28/05 - 08:32PM |
15: 12. Dead Week |
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Whoa. This is amazing. This Rosie seems to be related to everyone, doesnt she? lol . Its amazing how deep you went in, describing Rosie and her fmily and Bobby. Its just brilliant. Pure brilliance.
Author's Response: I hope Rosie's demeanor showsWow! Thanks for the review! I hope Rosie's demeanor through the story shows she’s a survivor. I imagine she comes from good stock and they all have a bit of that survival instinct in them. Well . . . maybe not the Radinsky side of the family so much. (More on that next chapter). I’m glad you like the chapter. Hope you keep reading. Thaks again for the review! |
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