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Angellover 02/07/05 - 11:35PM 9: There's No Place Like Plrtz Glrb Signed
Okay, I was all ready to go to bed and then you twisted my arm and made me read this chapter. You should be ashamed. Now my minds all funky fied and there's about a million little thoughts racing around in my head. BLAH!!! Anyways, this chapter was a little confusing for me. I don't know if it was just because I was tired or what but for some reason, and no I can't think of anything really specific, it was confusing. There were times that I wasn't really sure on who was talking to who and how Angel even got to Wolfram and Hart. Also, I swear, if Nicholas went through that portal and didn't stay behind even if he would be pulling the whole macho man thing by doing so... I'll hurt you pretty much if he doesn't come after her. Grr... Now I'm extremely tired. So... night and you better do good on the seqeul to this. There'll be a sequel right?

Author's Response: Sorry for the confusing-ness. I think I wrote that particular chappie at midnight, so...yeah. Speaks for itself. ...Heh-heh. The portal. I'm not saying anything about that.

Michael J 01/27/05 - 10:17PM 9: There's No Place Like Plrtz Glrb Signed
The story got off to a rocket start and quickly slowed down. I'm not sure how long you want to extend this, but if you're trying to keep Kat and Celia around for the duration of the Angel series timeline, you're dragging it out far far too long. Although it'd be interesting for Kat to see her 'older' brother born, trying to keep her around and working her into the series canon might start to lose steam after awhile. I was really hooked on the concept on the story, but once Angel found out she was his kid, the story kind of slowed down for me. Maybe it's me being impatient, but I think the pacing has slowed too much at the moment. Although seeing Kat react to Buffy's second death should be interesting, since Buffy would never tell her she'd already died twice.

Author's Response: Thanks for the input. It's always great to know what someone really thinks, even if it's not exactly what you want to hear. Only helps me make my story better, though. ^_^ It's funny, because I knew from the beginning exactly what was going to happen from when, and I can say that Katherine won't stick around in L.A. for all three years. She will leave for a good chunk of time, and then come back. I won't say for when or for why, though, but because you're getting restless, I'll tell you that much. ^_^
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