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Fedia 02/22/06 - 11:41PM 14: 11. Cabin in the Woods Signed
I love "that violent, primal version of himself", although it makes him suffer so much. He's the destroyer. He can't deny it. I feel so sorry for him right now.

Author's Response: I too love "that violent, primal version of himself." One of the things I want to make Connor deal with is the fact that this darkness is always with him. The pain of Quor'toth and the violence of his past are always there, even if he doesn't want to acknowledge it. Thanks again for the review and for reading.

Quortoth 12/18/05 - 12:13AM 14: 11. Cabin in the Woods Signed
I like that first part between Angel and Conner. And the Emily and Conner relationship has a good feel to it.

Author's Response: I want to work on the Angel/ Connor relationship. I want it to be cordial, but not perfect. There should still be some tension there. Thanks for the review.

angelsbabigurl08 04/03/05 - 04:47AM 14: 11. Cabin in the Woods Signed
I like it.I'm gonna make this short so I could get to the next chapter asap so great chapter.2 thumbs up.

Author's Response: Thanks for the thumbs up. Glad ot know you like it!

crayonbreaky gal 01/29/05 - 04:31PM 14: 11. Cabin in the Woods Signed
I somehow missed this chapter. I really like the pacing of this story. You have the slower parts and the fast, action parts intersperced (sp?) throughout the fic at the right points. It really does work well. Showing Connor's feral side was a good plot point. It had to come out if he was hunting sooner or later. Bringing Willow in to help Connor was an interesting choice and I like it. She knows what he is going through, with the killing of a human. And the Angel scenes were sad. Angel's lost everyone he loved except for Connor. And if you think about it, it's because of Connor, indirectly. Really nice chapter.

Author's Response: I'm glad I'm doing a good job on mixing up the pacing. I'm also glad to know that you like Connor's underlying feral nature, as well as Willow and Angel's relationship with him (and it- that feral nature of his). It's a theme that will be around for a while. Connor's not talking to Emily at the end was kind of a missed opportunity for him. She too knows how it is to live with a feral hunter just under the surface.

Michael J 01/25/05 - 11:10AM 14: 11. Cabin in the Woods Signed
More parallels between Connor and his dad. Now Connor essentially has a demon wrestling for control within himself too. I continue to thoroughly enjoy Emily as a character. She's got this whole "deer in headlights" appeal. She was thrust into the whole supernatural part of the world as well as the dating world without a net. She's barely treading water, but she's dealing and that shows remarkable strength on her part, even if she doesn't have all the answers just yet. It's a nice character to introduce since everyone else in the story has been around that life for so long that it'd seem weird for them to be doing anything else. The Connor/Angel talk at the beginning...it's about damn time they actually sat down and talked about some of their issues. They didn't hit all the notes I wanted them too, but I'm sure it'll come in time. The banter between them, without any kind of male posturing, was wonderful bonding. Connor/Emily remain a great couple. Again, just like his dad, Connor needs to be with someone that he feels a need to protect yet who is headstrong enough to take care of herself if need be. He also needs someone that'll press an issue and force him to talk. Otherwise, just like Pops, he shut himself off and let those issues simmer for way too long. That was some pretty intense brooding he was doing at the end there. The car wreck at the end......you and your cliffhangers. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I wanted to be obvious, but not too obvious, so I'm really glad to have intuitive readers like you. Connor is very, very much like his father. He has a demon inside him that feels a need to commit violent acts (albeit for a completely different reason). He's also broody and sullen like dad and that *is* for the same reason. They both think no one will understand. I'm so happy to see you still like Emily. She is quite out of place with the supernatural. As I'm sure you're aware, I too think Connor and Angel are long overdo for a chat. Hitting every subject they need to address in one sitting would be difficult since Angel is emotionally withdrawn and Connor his still uncomfortable with his father. I hope to "fix" that relationship over the course of the story. But again, doing so in one sitting would be quite unrealistic. I'm glad you're on board with that. Keep in mind, there's a trip with Angel coming up that might push that story along. Yep, me and my cliffhangers. But the car wreck is just the beginning of their problems. Thanks again for taking the time to read and share your thoughts with me, as well as others.

rockangelz25 01/24/05 - 06:20PM 14: 11. Cabin in the Woods Signed
Great chapter, as always. Great ending with the car crash, too. Can't wait to see what happens next. Also--do we see any more of the mysterious other werewolf? Or was he/she just a convenient "prop"??? Update soon, please!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. The car crash is just the beginning to the troubles those poor bastards are facing. I’ve got a chapter of RoF coming, then it’s on to the next Campus Life chapter. As for any other questions you might have, I think I’ve given out enough clues.

frenchtoast101 01/24/05 - 06:26AM 14: 11. Cabin in the Woods Signed
Ooooooh. Great, great, great. More please.^_^

Author's Response: I'll be working on the next chapter as soon as I wrap up the next "Running on Faith" ep. Glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for the review!

jess_lay 01/24/05 - 01:17AM 14: 11. Cabin in the Woods Signed
This was a really good chapter. The angel, connor talk about his past life on what had happen was kewl cuz angel admits all these stuff. And to see connors old ways coming back would be kind of kewl 2.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Yeah, I always thought Angel should own up to his part in Connor's descent into evil/madness/whichever. I already did Connor 2.1 reverting to Connor 1.0 in another story (shameless plug for my story “Running on Faith”). However, there will probably be a more aggressive, violent side to Connor for a while.

Revello1620 01/24/05 - 12:07AM 14: 11. Cabin in the Woods Signed
This chapter was amazing, I love Connor losing himself to his ferral nature but I can't help feeling like there is something else behind it :)

Author's Response: Connor’s feral tendencies won‘t evaporate overnight, so you’ll get to see them for a while. As for what’s behind it . . . well, it’s pretty simple. But I’m still not saying just yet.
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