Reviews for Cleveland's First Annual Beauty Contest
| angelsbabigurl08 |
05/21/05 - 12:34AM |
2: Putting on a show |
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Oz!!!Oh mai God!!!Where did he come from?!?I agree with filmtheroy. This is a better chapter than the first.This is totally good!!!
Author's Response: I couldn't help but include Oz ;) Thanks for the review, and am glad you're enjoying! |
| filmtheory |
05/16/05 - 04:49PM |
2: Putting on a show |
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This second chapter of your story is even better than the first. It has the classic elements of BtVS, the show; it's hysterically funny, but also with an underlying threat. It reminds me a lot of "Puppet Show." I ove the many fish out of water elements of the story. Only Buffy really seems in her element. Plus, good vibrations! I wonder if the song will have anything to do with what the baddies are plotting or if it was just a really funny gag. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. The main point of the story is to provide a little light weight comedy, which I don't write a lot of but enjoy doing. i'm glad that it can be found funny to a certain extent. Yes, many characters are out of their depth with the contest, as using the show's timeframe, Cordelia (who loved that sort of thing) and Anya (who was a bit of a poser) are kind of dead, and although ideal to use in the story, physically can't be there. So we're left with six not-quite beauty contestants, which either works or it doesn't. The song Good Vibrations....I can't reveal whether that has significance, as that may give away the story. But yes, it was definitely aimed as a gag piece. |
| Selene |
01/21/05 - 08:54PM |
2: Putting on a show |
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I love this story! Well the bathing suits are down and evening dresses and talent show is next. I can't wait! I LMAO when you mentioned the old Divynyls song. Very funny! This story has such a good mix of humor and attention to details with the characters. Did I mention I love it? Twice now! I thank you again for taking up the challenge and writing such an interesting take on it! I can't wait for more! Also seriously loving the Oz (he's worth bonus points!)
Author's Response: I'm glad you're still enjoying! Don't worry, the talent show will be up next, along with the final part. However, I don't know whether to include real votes into the story, I may need some feedback on that. Thanks for reviewing :) |
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