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Quortoth 12/18/05 - 12:11AM 13: 10. Unnatural Signed
Good, things seem to be going back to the well things between Emily and Conner. That makes this all nighter of mines good. Bravo.

Author's Response: Wow! I'm so excited I could keep you THAT hooked. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Glad you took the time to give me feedback. I REALY appreciate it.

gumboy 04/01/05 - 03:48PM 13: 10. Unnatural Signed
Just so you know, you've taken up a valuable part of my workday with good writing. I've got to remember not to hit this website while I'm work.
I've never liked Connor or Dawn much in ATS or BTVS, but you've done an excellent job writing them here. As usual, Willow, Kennedy and Angel's characters are right on target. Looking forward to the last chapter regarding Angelus.

Author's Response: Sorry for taking up your workday. If it makes you feel better, the itme I spend working on this I should be doint other things as well. I never cared for Dawn much, but I always had a soft spot for Connor. I hope you're liking them here. Hopefully I'll keep you interested.

Michael J 01/25/05 - 11:01AM 13: 10. Unnatural Signed
The more you write of Dawn in this story, the less I like her. I keep having to remind myself that this isn't the same Dawn you're writing in RoF. I do love the talk between Angel and Connor's adopted parents. Everyone hit the right notes (his sister eavesdropping was particularly cute) and Connor outwardly demanding that Angel be allowed to stay in his life had to put Angel's soul at risk, if you know what I'm saying. I also love how level headed Willow is about all this. Her logical approach to the situation in contrast to Dawn's overreaction was perfect. It is nice to see that Dawn sucked it up and talked to Emily though. Points in her favor. And Angel hanging around at the end, sensing that his son would want to talk. Perfect. I don't mind exposition chapters as long as the story actually moves along.

Author's Response: Sorry to hear you're not liking Dawn. In a way, I think she is the same Dawn I'm writing in RoF, she's just (a) a year younger and therefore less developed and (b) facing a different set of events and emotions. I'm also not sure Dawn overreacted. Willow seems logical and even-headed now. But there was a time not so long ago when you were wondering, "Why's Willow being so harsh to Connor? Isn't that a bit extreme?" Willow's reaction was pretty similar to Dawn's, she's just already been through it. As for Angel, yeah- Connor should put Angel's soul at risk, shouldn't he? I mean, if laying a hot blonde is enough to achieve perfect happiness, shouldn't your first child (particularly if you shouldn't be able to have kids) do the same? Well . . . more on that later.

Revello1620 01/24/05 - 12:06AM 13: 10. Unnatural Signed
i loved this chapter:)

Author's Response: Thanks! Hopefully you'll like the rest as well.

crayonbreaky gal 01/14/05 - 04:32PM 13: 10. Unnatural Signed
Exposition is the name of the game. If you don't have it, the story falls apart. You needed this chapter to move the story along. We had to know some things as the reader, so you offered it up in conversations. Not too shabby. Kennedy sure wasn't being nice to Willow. I'm not sure why she puts up with it myself. I can see why Connor would be upset about what he did. He should be. And his talk with Angel? That's what needed to happen. I can't wait to see what he tells Angel, and what he asks for advice on. Could make Angel feel really uncomfortable. Could be really funny in places too.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I’m glad you liked it. I hope it wasn’t all just exposition. Although there was a lot of background, I hope there was also enough conflict to keep the story interesting. I don’t know that I’m actually going to show Connor’s conversation with Angel. I think Connor getting there (being able to talk to Angel about his problems) was the important part. But who knows? If I put together a good Connor/ Angel conversation, I’ll probably want to share it.

frenchtoast101 01/14/05 - 06:22AM 13: 10. Unnatural Signed
Yay! Another great chapter. Its nice to see Connor and Emily back together...But I still feel bad for Dawn. Plz update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. It's nice to see you think it's nice to see Connor and EMily back together. I have a soft spot for those two kids. I'm also glad the all drama chapter didn't scare you off.
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