Reviews for Running on Faith, Season Two
| Quortoth |
03/13/06 - 03:34PM |
9: 2.09: Old Loves |
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I liked that episode a lot, Conner talks a lot during sex. :-) [I'm laughing right now.] I like the romance and want to know what happens next between them. Great one.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like the romantic aspects. Connor is still pretty inexperienced with women and sex, so he's constantly questioning himself in that, and ever other human interaction. |
| Painbow |
03/29/05 - 12:24AM |
9: 2.09: Old Loves |
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| ' Faith jerked away. “What a crock of shit,” she said. “You completely disappeared from my life!”
“I was a P.O.W.” Billy said incredulously. “I disappeared from everyone’s life.” '
Hee! Again, great moment!
Great chapter! So glad Dawn finally figured out what she wanted. And great reveal/cliffhanger, but now...damnit! I need to go to bed, but I'm going to read the next chapter *g*
Author's Response: Glad you liked the cliffhanger. I was often asked why I never gave more details about an event from the first season. Now you know why. It never happened. Hopefully I can keep your interest. |
| Monkey Pants |
01/19/05 - 07:47PM |
9: 2.09: Old Loves |
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A very eventful chapter. I'm not a Dawn fan. I'm not a Connor fan. I don't exactly root for stories that bring them together. But, as I have said before, your stories make both characters incredibly likable in ways that the shows never could. Like the Spike/Faith tension and FAith's little backstory. Plus, the Mayor. You brought him funnily but menacingly to life in the cliffhanger, which set off the chapter effectively.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad I can make people like Dawn and Connor. I actually have a soft spot for Connor and most other hard luck cases. The Spike/Faith tension will probably last a while. I'm also glad you liked the cliffhanger. |
| Michael J |
01/18/05 - 10:39PM |
9: 2.09: Old Loves |
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Yes! You know by now that I've been waiting for you to follow up on what happened between Faith and the Mayor last season. While the Mayor isn't a favorite character of mine, he is quite pivotal to Faith's character (probably the most important next to Angel), so I'm looking forward to more of their story. I have to admit I'm a bit biased against Dawn/Connor for a few reasons, one of which being that I love them NOT being together in Campus Life (I love Emily, sue me). I do like Connor bumbling his way through being a gentleman (his matter-of-fact way of offeirng his jacket was hilarious), but I hope you don't pigeonhole Dawn's development into the Connor relationship. I was really enjoying watching her grow as a self assured woman last season and I hope to get more of that. I also enjoyed the respect that Faith is giving her, so I'm waiting for an explosion between the two over Faith keeping the Mayor a secret.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Yes, I do know you’ve been waiting for me to follow up on Faith killing the Mayor. So now you know why I never showed that scene. The reason I didn’t have Dawn and Connor together in *Campus Life* was that I did plan to have them together here. I don’t want to write to D/C fics. However, in this story, Connor’s attraction to Dawn fits pretty well. He’s certainly attracted to authoritative brunettes. I’m a little disappointed you’re afraid I’ll pigeonhole Dawn. I’m also sad to read you don’t like the Mayor. I LOVE the Mayor. He’s just this wonderful mix of goofy and evil. But, as you noted, he is an important player in Faith’s inner-struggle. That’s why he’s in this fic. Unfortunately, you may be robbed of the explosion over Faith’s keeping secrets. There will be much more immediate physical threats in the near future. By the time they’re over, the group will probably be on the same page regarding Faith’s decision. |
| crayonbreaky gal |
01/10/05 - 12:32AM |
9: 2.09: Old Loves |
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"He's got stupid hair". Spike has learned from the master, as in Angel. So funny. I'm glad that you made Dawn upset about Cordelia. No woman would want to be compared to the likes of her. Of course, it wasn't Cordy at the time. Poor Faith. She and Spike are on the outs. That kind of bums me out. I really like them together in your fic. And the surprise ending. Gotta tell ya, I didn't see that one coming. Good holdoff on that. I think it ended the chapter very nicely. I like the fact that Dawn took the initiative with Connor. She likes him, he's so inexperienced with people, period, so she needed to take control. Girl knows what she wants. And Spike will still smell them a mile away even with the shower. Story is moving along very nicely.
Author's Response: Thanks as always for the review. Yeah, Dawn being jealous of Cordy isn't great. Connor will probably have some issues with Dawn in chapters to come. But Dawn will be "taking control" in a lot of ways in the rest of the season. Faith and Spike on the outs makes me sad too. I'm going to have to do somehting about that soon. But not too, too soon. As far as what Spike will "smell" . . . . well, you'll jsut have to keep reading. Glad you liked the ending. The beginnig of the next chapter will have the scene I've been asked about a dozen times. |
| rockangelz25 |
01/09/05 - 01:31PM |
9: 2.09: Old Loves |
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Yes!!! You finally updated it!!! (I have a short patience limit. Sorry. I can't handle waiting for chapter installments.) Great cliffhanger! (Even if it wasn't meant to be a cliffhanger, it turned out like one.) It's great in general. Please update again soon!
Author's Response: Sorry for the long wait. Christmas break is a time for family (and school work). Classes and work have been a pain since I got back. I may be slow in postig future installments. If so, please accept my apologies in advance. |
| rockangelz25 |
01/09/05 - 01:31PM |
9: 2.09: Old Loves |
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Yes!!! You finally updated it!!! (I have a short patience limit. Sorry. I can't handle waiting for chapter installments.) Great cliffhanger! (Even if it wasn't meant to be a cliffhanger, it turned out like one.) It's great in general. Please update again soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for waiting. Hopefully I won't be too long in updating again. |
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