Reviews for Time To Move On
| filmtheory |
11/28/05 - 01:47AM |
2: Chapter Two: What was it? |
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Great chapter. Can't wait to see the interchange. I must go read more now :)
Author's Response: Aww, thanks! |
| Selene |
01/17/05 - 07:55PM |
2: Chapter Two: What was it? |
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Very good summery of the last season. You have a tendancy to transpose letters I have the same exact problem! I have to keep rereading what I write... And spellcheck! I absolutely love the fact that the hotel that they were travelling to is the Hyperion. I hope I am correct in guessing that...
Author's Response: Yeah...thanks. I'm going to run it through spell check asap! |
| Barbie Girl |
01/12/05 - 11:03AM |
2: Chapter Two: What was it? |
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Wonderful story that has me intrested and wanting more. I really think your dialogue is true to character...
One suggestion: You might want to get a beta or run spell check and proofread. You have quiet a few misspelled words.
Author's Response: Yeah...I realized that. I'll do a spell check on it asap! |
| lessthanangelic1 |
01/09/05 - 08:57AM |
2: Chapter Two: What was it? |
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ooooh....it's really good! i like it a lot, so please- update soon
Author's Response: Thanks so much! My computer was messed up today and I just now got on. I have to go to dance class now, but I promise I will find some time to update it tomorrow! Please recomend it to others. |
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