Reviews for Time To Move On
| sugarmouse |
04/08/06 - 08:02AM |
1: Chapter One: On the Road |
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| Nice chapter. It's a nice account of what may have happened on the bus. Well done |
| filmtheory |
11/28/05 - 01:51AM |
3: Chapter Three: Is There a New Evil? |
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I LOVE dream sequences. Grat job. I have ideas about what the dream means (and I'm so happy you indicated that it does mean something). Soooo cool.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! Yeah, I love dream sequences too. In my book, I put them all over the place, lol. |
| filmtheory |
11/28/05 - 01:47AM |
2: Chapter Two: What was it? |
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Great chapter. Can't wait to see the interchange. I must go read more now :)
Author's Response: Aww, thanks! |
| filmtheory |
11/28/05 - 01:47AM |
1: Chapter One: On the Road |
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I love the story. The opening paragraph did such a great job of building a kind of paradox. Buffy longing for a place that was living hell. Then again, it wasn’t all living hell. Besides, why shouldn’t slayers succumb to Stockholm Syndrome? (flawed comparison since she loves the place, not the captors, but still). I like the heart to heart about Anya.
Author's Response: Thanks. I acutally wrote this chapter one day at school, lol. |
| BelovedSlayer |
01/28/05 - 08:46PM |
9: Chapter Nine: Time To Move On |
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Loved it. But im hoping there'll will be a great fight coming soon. keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thanks...there will be. Don't worry! |
| BelovedSlayer |
01/27/05 - 11:33PM |
1: Chapter One: On the Road |
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The chapter plans is really awesome. i cant wait to read the next chapter. keep up the great work. I didn't even know you were actually getting a book published thats really cool cuz im trying to do the same at the moment and about to send my stuff in a couple of days. maybe you can give me some pointers. my name is debbie and my email address is moongoddess1892@yahoo.com Great fic by the way!!
Author's Response: Okay...I'll e-mail you and you can ask me any questions that you may have. |
| Psyche2 |
01/20/05 - 06:58PM |
7: Chapter Seven: Trouble After Dining |
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Awesome! Keep reading!
Author's Response: Thanks! |
| DiabloVixen |
01/17/05 - 08:17PM |
6: Chapter Six: What do we do now? |
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i really love this Fic i'm hooked!
Update soon Please!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Oh and don't worry. I try to update almost every day. It might be hard this week though...too many tests to study for! |
| Selene |
01/17/05 - 08:08PM |
6: Chapter Six: What do we do now? |
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Huh? Just a little itty bitty chapter... I need more! Update soon! Keep up the great work...
Author's Response: Thanks, again. I'm actually going to update it some now. |
| Selene |
01/17/05 - 08:06PM |
5: Chapter Five: A Meeting is Held |
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YES! Wood is dead! I couldn't stand him! Yippee! The only way this could be any better is to have the next victim be Kennedy! I guess I am a little bloodthirsty... Great story! I am almost caught up...
Author's Response: lol...I know. I didn't really like him that much either. I'll have to think about the Kennedy thing to. I really HATE her! |
| Selene |
01/17/05 - 08:03PM |
4: Chapter Four: It's gone! |
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very intriguing idea... nice cliffhanger! I have to read on... I'm hooked.
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you! |
| Selene |
01/17/05 - 07:59PM |
3: Chapter Three: Is There a New Evil? |
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very creepy dream... great job!
Author's Response: Thanks...I tried my best. lol... |
| Selene |
01/17/05 - 07:55PM |
2: Chapter Two: What was it? |
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Very good summery of the last season. You have a tendancy to transpose letters I have the same exact problem! I have to keep rereading what I write... And spellcheck! I absolutely love the fact that the hotel that they were travelling to is the Hyperion. I hope I am correct in guessing that...
Author's Response: Yeah...thanks. I'm going to run it through spell check asap! |
| Selene |
01/17/05 - 07:49PM |
1: Chapter One: On the Road |
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I like how you wrapped up the ending scene with the Scoobies. Also the part where Xander expressed his grief about Anya. It always bothered me that there was almost no reaction on the series finale. The two of them had been off and on for so long and all she got was a mention? C'mon! I can tell that maybe you are a Angel/Buffy lover... I happen to love spuffy. ;) Thanks for at least mentioning that she could have some sort of love for Spike. I must continue on...
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you! I know. Xander didn't even seem sad at all! I was like, 'Hello, Anya just died and Andrew is alive. Aren't you even a little sad?' Anyway, thanks for the review. Oh and about the Angel, Buffy, and Spike Buffy thing...just wait until the upcoming chapters. There's going to be some kind of...nvm. I don't want to give anything away! Thanks for taking the time to write a review! |
| DiabloVixen |
01/17/05 - 07:00PM |
3: Chapter Three: Is There a New Evil? |
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I really like it... I think you might want to proofread a bit.. there are spelling errors that take away from a really good story... otherwise it ROCKS.. =)
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah...I so need to run it through spell check asap. Thanks again! |
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