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filmtheory 05/04/05 - 11:25PM 2: Safe Signed
I like happy,nice, walks-Buffy-home Angel. Later, he turned into a reclusive, loner, jackass type. You really comunicated a lot about their relationship in one short chapter. Buffy is still a young girl looking for a man to save her, not yet the confident, independent woman we see later. Great job!

Author's Response: wow....thanks...really that means a lot to me

Revello1620 01/06/05 - 03:36PM 2: Safe Signed
Don't sweat the shortness of the chapters. All that matters is that you keep the story flowing and so far so good :)

Author's Response: thanks for the tip...i really appreciate it!
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