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Xena406 01/15/05 - 11:00PM 2: Memories of Murder Signed
You seem to have a good grasp on how you want the story to flow, but I am not understanding why Willow and Benny are fighting so much about Joseph's death. Could you explain that to me a little more? Is it some sort of psychological thing between them or something? Or are you going to answer that in the next installment?

Author's Response: Yeah, just keep reading...in "CHILLING IN THE DAYLIGHT" I think I answer all of your questions. If you have anymore after that, review again or contact me for more info in the backstory of this story. And, again, thanks for the review.

Xena406 01/15/05 - 10:58PM 4: Growing Up A Slayer Signed
I think it gets kinda wordy in spot, but I like the background into your character Benny. It is obvious that you have taken a lot of time to figure out what makes her tick. I am still surprised that she didn't see anything with Will and Kennedy though, but then after re-reading your story so far, I can see why. You didn't seem to have a lot of Kennedy and Willow scenes. I think it is great so far...keep it up...I like it...but just one question...where is the Watcher and Slayer U thing going, I mean....are you leading it to another possible story or something.

Author's Response: I dunno at this time, but maybe that would be a good idea. Maybe that will be my next story....maybe even a round robin type of deal....but who knows where I am really going with this but the characters as I am writing it.

Wolfkin 01/12/05 - 10:27AM 1: And, then there was Benny Signed
I like it. Benny hadn't noticed Willow and Kennedy, tho? Keep it going!

Author's Response: Thank you. I will. I am just glad that there are other Buffy fans like me out there. This is my way of keeping the story going.

Psyche2 01/04/05 - 06:56PM 1: And, then there was Benny Signed
Cool I like it...keep up!

Author's Response: I added more to this one....but keep reading...thanks.
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