Reviews for The Past Is My Present
| Angellover |
01/02/05 - 06:10PM |
2: Sing Us A New One |
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I really liked this chapter. The flashbacks really helped with a better understanding of the characters. I really like how you had David being her best friend instead of her twin too. That isn't something you hear much about. I must say though that I was a little confused at first when you started calling her Faith. But everything made a lot more sense when she stated that that was just her middle name. I also like how you have Angel and Faith saying some of the same wordings to show how much alike they are. You're doing a great job and this is definatley going to be interesting.
Author's Response: I figured the flashbacks would have been helpful, and I thought that it was better for Katherine to have someone other than her sister as her best friend, because it'll be one more thing Celia hates her for. As for her middle name being Faith, well, if you'll notice the sisters' names: Celia, named after Buffy's cousin ("Killed by Death", 2.18); Katherine, named after Angel's sister; and her middle name Faith, obviously after our favourite Rogue Slayer. I wanted to mention it but didn't really see how it would fit, that Celia's middle name is Joyce. |
| Michael J |
01/02/05 - 02:46AM |
2: Sing Us A New One |
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Love this chapter. I can so picture Cordy and Doyle as Oracles. I love how you wrote Faith's slight akwardness at meeting her real father for the first time. And the entire story, Angelus murdering Faith as she was trying to save Buffy (Faith Harris?!? we must know Xander's fate) and Spike having to stake his grandsire. It'll be interesting to find out how much Faith lets the group in on. Wesley, braintrust that he is, probably put all the pieces together just from the story. Really loving this. I'm assuming that Celia will be hooking up with W&H. Can't wait for the inevitable showdown.
Author's Response: All I can do right now is smile and marvel at the fact that I didn't screw the story over by writing this in the wee hours of the morning. ^_^ Since it's all in the next chapter anyway, I don't mind saying that Faith has to tell a lot of what happened, mainly because Lorne is going to read her and find out about it anyway. ...And as for Celia joining the ranks of W&H? But of course. Actually, I think you'll find it interesting what W&H plans to do in regards to Faith. |
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