Reviews for Sequel to Darkness Within
| Psyche2 |
10/04/05 - 01:36PM |
19: Chapter Eighteen: The Game of Catch Up |
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| Please update sooon! This is amazing and I'm at the edge of my seat! |
| i_hate_mornings |
08/29/05 - 10:24AM |
1: Authours Note |
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| I keep reading this, hoping for an update. Please update soon. This and the one before it are my favourite stories on any site.
Buffy has to go back to him right? They belong together. |
| Psyche2 |
08/21/05 - 09:51PM |
19: Chapter Eighteen: The Game of Catch Up |
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| This is like the third time I am reading this!!! it is sooo awesome can you pleasse update soon! |
| cuzzygee |
08/11/05 - 07:28PM |
19: Chapter Eighteen: The Game of Catch Up |
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| The story is getting pretty good. When can we expect an update |
| lessthanangelic1 |
07/26/05 - 11:42AM |
19: Chapter Eighteen: The Game of Catch Up |
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AH-HA-i was right...it was mira! go mee go mee go mee *does a little happy dance* anyways i liked this chapter...you give background without making reading it a total bore and that's something many authors can't do. i hope you will update soon...i'd like to know what's going to happen now
Author's Response: *hand over a trophy* I would like to give you this on behalf of guessing what came next in The Sequel to The Darkness Within. *says this in a very officaial voice.* LOL. Thanks for the review. Glad I'm keepign your interest |
| MissEdith |
07/21/05 - 01:25PM |
19: Chapter Eighteen: The Game of Catch Up |
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I agree with Psyche2...great chapter but please please please can Mira explain how exactly she came to be? I have a theory, actually. I thought of it yesterday, and I'm very proud. Cuz Buffy and Giles talked about how there are alternate universes where we made a different decision, so there's one where Angel didn't take back the day, so Mira was born, and then somehow grew up in the wrong reality...and that's where my theory dies....and like Psyche2 said, is Buffy gonna see Angel again? She has to! I will be very very very sad if she doesn't. I think he should at least be able to go to heaven....
Author's Response: Don't worry. Everything will work itself out in the end. Well, actually that's a lie but hey, whatever. :) I will tell you though that this isn't the end of Buffy and Angel's life together. |
| Psyche2 |
07/21/05 - 09:38AM |
19: Chapter Eighteen: The Game of Catch Up |
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Ok...first I was confused then I was surprised now I'm just happy and amazed! I knew Mira would play a big role in this I jsut didn't know how!! I had a feeling she was Angel and Buffy's but can we have more backstory? Cuz wow.....and will Buffy ever see Angel again?!!? I love this...great chapters...I can't believe I missed them...but I caught up so yay! UPDATE SOON!!!
Author's Response: I think I'll have a backstory for her but honestly I really don't know much about her either. Whatever I've written is all I really know about her also. so pretty much, you and I are on the same page. I think I'm going to have to sit down soon and figure out what to do with her character. LOL. I've made her important though so I think I should do something. |
| lessthanangelic1 |
07/11/05 - 03:00PM |
18: Chapter Seventeen- Cookie Dough Fudge Mint Chip |
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ok so it's a little short but wow...what a curveball you threw at us in the end...can i assume this may be Mira or am i just reading into things that aren't really there? anyways i also really appreciate you e-mailing me with the update and i'm again asking if you could do it once more. hope you update it soon...and again awesome chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Don't worry, e-mailing you for the update isnt' a problem for me. |
| MissEdith |
07/10/05 - 06:16PM |
18: Chapter Seventeen- Cookie Dough Fudge Mint Chip |
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I agree with Ksue...holy crap. How did Buffy end up with a kid w/o knowing it? Usually there's this whole 9-month process, the mom's kinda involved....Unless it's not Buffy & Angel's kid; some other woman licked the same flavor of ice cream off of some other guy's chest, and of course that guy sounds like a vampire, and then they went and had a daughter who looks really familiar to Buffy, probably because she looks like her....I'm gonna stop now.
Author's Response: LOL. Yes, the mother is usually involved with the whole pregnancy thing. It'll all be explained in time. Don't worry. |
| Ksue |
07/10/05 - 08:39AM |
18: Chapter Seventeen- Cookie Dough Fudge Mint Chip |
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Ah! Oh my word. I have no words, holy crap. That was a good chapter. PLease update soon! Oh my gosh...wow.
Author's Response: *smiles brightly* Thank you! |
| MissEdith |
07/08/05 - 10:39PM |
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OK, i was just randomly thinking about this story and something occurred to me...wouldn't Giles' paper, I dunno, break down in 300 years? Oh well, it's a magical spell, it scoffs at laws of...um...nature....
Author's Response: Uh oh. You've got me thinking now about a reason to explain that. Bad MissEdith. Now I'm all deep and having to fix that. I can garunteen that'll come up in the next chapter now. LOL |
| cuzzygee |
07/07/05 - 04:37AM |
17: Chapter Sixteen- Promises |
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Thank you for writing a great story. I am totally seeing everything in my mind, like it was an episode on TV.
You have a awesome way of describing things in your words and I am drawn to the way the story is shaping.
Author's Response: Thank you, I try to make the imagery as clear as possilbe. It's nice to know that it's coming through loud and clear. |
| lessthanangelic1 |
07/06/05 - 04:31PM |
17: Chapter Sixteen- Promises |
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omg...i so almost cried that was so sad! and yes the fact that i was moved to tears is a little weird if i think to hard about it but hey that means you're doing such and excellent job at writing this story! i can't wait for an update and i hope if you have the time you could e-mail me and let me know that you are updating otherwise i'll never know! two thumbs up and all the gold stars in the galexy!
Author's Response: I'd be more then happy to e-mail you when I update. It's not trouble at all. I'm really glad you liked the chapter |
| MissEdith |
07/02/05 - 11:44AM |
17: Chapter Sixteen- Promises |
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oh my god...i come back from vacation and go to see what i missed, and this is what greets me? THAT WAS SO SAD!!!!!!! I ALMOST CRIED!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY, AND PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE GIVE ME SOMETHING A LITTLE HAPPIER THAN THAT! so yeah....this is most definitely a compliment because it's beautifully written and all that...sorry about the ranting in caps lock...i'm kinda in shock right now from that SAD SAD SAD SAD SAD chapter.
Author's Response: LOL. Thank you so much for the complimate. I'm afraid though that I really don't know if any happiness is going to come along soon. |
| toshie |
07/01/05 - 08:50AM |
17: Chapter Sixteen- Promises |
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Well done! Well done! Well done! Fabulous! Ok, just to be clear - I agree with the rest - it's the best one yet!
Author's Response: Wow, that's so nice of you guys. I just kind of whipped that out because I was bored. I hadn't actually meant for her to go back up to heaven, but when I finnished my little rambles that I do just to get the juices flowing I couldn't believe what I had wrote, so I had to keep it in there. |
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