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Reviews for Between Apocalypses




BuffyFanatic 01/20/05 - 03:41PM 4: Chapter Three Signed
Oops...I didnt' realize you couldn' t use enter on the review thing. Each dialouge thing was like a new paragraph. Sorry for the confusion.

BuffyFanatic 01/20/05 - 03:39PM 4: Chapter Three Signed
Great story so far! I only have one suggestion. I think your story would flow better if you have one line for each time a character spoke. For expamle: "Hey!" Buffy called. "Hi. What's up?" Dawn asked. "Nothing much...aren't you supposed to be in school?" "Maybe..." "Hi guys. Whatcha up to?" Willow asked entering the room. I just made that stuff up off the top of my head. Anyway, you story is still really great, but that would make it easier to read and the dialouge wouldn't run together. I'll have to read the rest of your story asap. I have to go study right now...keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Yeah... A couple of people have already commented on the spacing. It was already fixed in the last few chapters--but I didn't do as much of it as I thought I did in the first few (first five? six? hard to keep track). Anyway, hopefully they're all spaced out now. Sorry. I'm glad you're liking the rest of it. Keep reading it--again, I'm sorry about the spacing thing. I think that last time I was half-asleep, which would explain the half spacing--please. I'm glad you like it.

filmtheory 01/20/05 - 11:03AM 4: Chapter Three Signed
This chapter had a lot of really clever lines. You're really good at banter. The Riley twist was a good one. I'm still not clear on the Dawn/Angel friction, but I'm sure it'll get explained. The story is moving along nicely.

Author's Response: Thanks for the comment on the Riley twist--it kind of came out of nowhere. Hopefully, it (the story in general)'s going to keep moving along. Thanks for reviewing it again!

Monkey Pants 01/04/05 - 05:46PM 4: Chapter Three Signed
I liked your take on what happened after Not Fade Away, and the continuity combination of Willow, Faith and Illyria. My only little complaint is perhaps the layout of you fic, if there was more spacing, it would be slightly easier to read. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reading it--I'm glad that you like it, except for the layout thing. I suck at summaries, and I suck at layouts. I'll try to figure out a way to make it easier to read. But thanks for taking the time to r/r!






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