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faith_slayer89 02/13/05 - 01:05PM 20: Chapter Nineteen Signed
Whoa...bad Faith seriously needs a cold shower or something. Unless I'm taking it the wrong way and I'm the one who needs a cold shower...

Author's Response: Eh.... You can take it any way, technically.... ;)

filmtheory 02/02/05 - 01:56PM 9: Chapter Eight Signed
Another good chapter for plot development. That definitely was pure Faith. I wonder where everyone went. I also wonder if Will's about to open a witch-powered can of whoopass.

Author's Response: Thanks for both reviews--also, the comments on Faith, and Angel in the previous chapter. I'm trying not to draw it out too much, so.... Who knows where it's going to wind up? (Whether or not Willow can contain herself.) I'm glad you still like it... Please, keep reading!

filmtheory 02/02/05 - 01:53PM 8: Chapter Seven Signed
Happy moment for Angel- pride, love, and Lawrence's approval. Willow as Connor's mom is funny, as was Angel forgetting her last name. Short chapter, but I don't feel sheated.

faith_slayer89 01/28/05 - 05:09PM 19: Chapter Eighteen Signed
Kinda short, BUT I'm doubly looking forward to the next chappie. That sucks that Connor's a psycho again. Hopefully the spell with be reversed before him, the vampires, or the Slayers do too much damage.

Author's Response: Thanks for the great review. Connor isn't completely psycho, just somewhere toeing the line of sanity. He's NOT going to go out and strap himself, plus many civilians, to a bomb in a sports store. Thanks for reviewing it again!

filmtheory 01/27/05 - 06:59PM 7: Chapter Six Signed
Another awesome chapter. Way for Illyria to spill the beans! I'm wondering if we're heading back to Feral Connor. Boy, I miss him. Willow's reaction was perfect. Angel screwed up and she'll probably give him hell later. But for now, it's all about rescuing Angel's son.

Author's Response: Illyria wouldn't have seen anything wrong with what she said (or maybe that's why she did it, it's hard to tell with her). Sooner or later, there'll probably be an Angel vs. everyone else thing, because they'll all be mad about the memory changes and him keeping his son a secret to begin with. Please keep reading--and reviewing..... Hopefully you'll also like the rest of it. Thanks for the great review.

filmtheory 01/27/05 - 03:15PM 6: Chapter Five Signed
I like Angel putting the pieces together as poor Connor's world starts falling apart. I always kind of preferred feral Connor and I wonder if he's headed back there. I like Faith putting things together. I also like the idea of Faith and Connor. Go, kid! Go! Keep gettin' down with dem older brunettes! I like that Angel is afraid of what Riley might do to Connor, but can't tell anyone without giving away more information than he'd like. Keep the chapters coming.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing it again... Connor may be headed back feralness. I keep intending to do a chapter on him, but get sidetracked by everything else. (Other chapters, other stories.... And everything else.) Angel's "protection" of Connor does turn out to be pretty pointless in the long run, doesn't it? Hm. Glad you still like it.

faith_slayer89 01/26/05 - 03:50PM 18: Chapter Seventeen Signed
Takin' a break from writing to read this. Great, as always. Glad to see Dru make an actual appearance. The crazy person always makes thing more fun. And if she's a psychic crazy vampire, all the better. Lol.

Author's Response: True--crazy people (or vamps) that are like Dru are much more fun. She also tends to balance things out between Angelus and Spike. Thanks for reading it some more..... Also, thanks for the great review.

faith_slayer89 01/25/05 - 05:32PM 17: Chapter Sixteen Signed
Amazing, fantastic, and all that goodness in between. Dru possessing Riley, and everyone at their worst: inspired. The only qualm I have is that there's no possibility for Angel and Buffy. Other than that, excellent excellent story!

Author's Response: Hmm.... Thanks for the great review! (I'm practically blushing! Not literally, but you see my point.) You never know--Angel and Buffy could get together. Not all that likely, but possible. (Then again, anything's possible with Buffy stuff.) Thanks for reviewing--I'll try to keep it good.

filmtheory 01/25/05 - 12:32AM 5: Chapter Four Signed
Hell spawns and memory spells. THis could get interesting. I'm wondering what the research will turn up and how much anyone knows about what happened at W&H. You're doing a great job keeping me guessing.

Author's Response: Thanks. It's always good when you can be one step ahead of people (when you get two steps ahead, well, that's kind of bad). I'm glad you still like it.... Also glad that it has the ability to get interesting. (From other people's points of view, anyway.) I'm going to try and update again soon..... Hope you keep reading. Thanks.

BuffyFanatic 01/20/05 - 03:41PM 4: Chapter Three Signed
Oops...I didnt' realize you couldn' t use enter on the review thing. Each dialouge thing was like a new paragraph. Sorry for the confusion.

BuffyFanatic 01/20/05 - 03:39PM 4: Chapter Three Signed
Great story so far! I only have one suggestion. I think your story would flow better if you have one line for each time a character spoke. For expamle: "Hey!" Buffy called. "Hi. What's up?" Dawn asked. "Nothing much...aren't you supposed to be in school?" "Maybe..." "Hi guys. Whatcha up to?" Willow asked entering the room. I just made that stuff up off the top of my head. Anyway, you story is still really great, but that would make it easier to read and the dialouge wouldn't run together. I'll have to read the rest of your story asap. I have to go study right now...keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Yeah... A couple of people have already commented on the spacing. It was already fixed in the last few chapters--but I didn't do as much of it as I thought I did in the first few (first five? six? hard to keep track). Anyway, hopefully they're all spaced out now. Sorry. I'm glad you're liking the rest of it. Keep reading it--again, I'm sorry about the spacing thing. I think that last time I was half-asleep, which would explain the half spacing--please. I'm glad you like it.

filmtheory 01/20/05 - 11:03AM 4: Chapter Three Signed
This chapter had a lot of really clever lines. You're really good at banter. The Riley twist was a good one. I'm still not clear on the Dawn/Angel friction, but I'm sure it'll get explained. The story is moving along nicely.

Author's Response: Thanks for the comment on the Riley twist--it kind of came out of nowhere. Hopefully, it (the story in general)'s going to keep moving along. Thanks for reviewing it again!

filmtheory 01/18/05 - 06:09PM 3: Chapter Two Signed
Great chapter for plot development and exposition. I imagine a very awkward reunion is soon to follow.

filmtheory 01/18/05 - 05:47PM 2: Chapter One Signed
There's so much I like about this fic that I think I'll have trouble getting it all out. I like how you handled the battle. I’ve read a lot of accounts of how that battle would shake out. They were all great battle scenes, but I’ve read enough of them to not want to read another. You sum up the big fight nicely: they fought, Willow to the rescue, ‘nuf said. I also like how you didn’t wimp out on Wes, Gunn, and Lorne. Gunn doesn’t mysteriously recover or get healed by Willow. Illyria doesn’t raise Wes form the dead. Lorne doesn’t decide at the last minute that he can’t abandon his friends. That’s not to say that you can’t bring those characters back. Anything is possible. But you didn’t throw out a one spell cures all revival. Next is Willow. Man, do you have Willow down. From her thoughts to her words, your Willow is perfect. Great start to what I’m sure will be a great story.

Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment on Willow--she's definitely one of my favorites. Also, I'm glad you like my take on the big battle thing. (Even though there's only about ten thousand variations on it in other stories....) Also, thanks for the spacing comment. I'll try to fix that. I'm glad you took the time to r/r it--also glad that you like it.

Monkey Pants 01/04/05 - 05:46PM 4: Chapter Three Signed
I liked your take on what happened after Not Fade Away, and the continuity combination of Willow, Faith and Illyria. My only little complaint is perhaps the layout of you fic, if there was more spacing, it would be slightly easier to read. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reading it--I'm glad that you like it, except for the layout thing. I suck at summaries, and I suck at layouts. I'll try to figure out a way to make it easier to read. But thanks for taking the time to r/r!

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