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Michael J 12/21/04 - 11:18AM 7: The Gang Signed
I really liked this story. I think you struggled a bit with the character voices, mainly Buffy, Angel, and Giles, but I did enjoy the plot immensely. I was hoping you would've done more with Angel's angst over possibly turning Lisa, but I understand that had to be sacrificed to tell the Tucker/Julie story. Wasn't entirely clear on the grand plan at the end there since it didn't seem to unnerve Sven enough before the fight, but your description of the action was pretty good. Particularly enjoyed Xander's anger when Buffy didn't choose him. Even when she explained herself, it still didn't completely sit well with him. Great little moment to play into Xander's character arc during season 3 of the show.






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