Reviews for Angelus
| lessthanangelic1 |
12/14/04 - 04:49PM |
2: What Happened? |
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| DAMNIT WHAT HAPPEND!!??!?!?!?! i really wanna kno! |
| Monkey Pants |
12/07/04 - 07:42PM |
2: What Happened? |
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I don't fault you on the story writing, as you seem to understand the characters ad the plot that you have introduced. And the second chapter has a subtle yet effective cliffhanger that makes me want to read more. BUT *and theres always a but*, the fic wasn't very readable in terms of format. Maybe if you used more spacing, it would be more comfortable to read.
Author's Response: Thanks for the tip! I changed the spacing and now it's much easier to read! |
| Psyche2 |
12/07/04 - 07:33PM |
2: What Happened? |
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| Continue!!!!!!!!!!!! Awesome.....make something happen to Buffy! if u want! |
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