Reviews for The Next Mission
| tamzinrose |
03/23/05 - 02:30PM |
11: One Night Pt. 2 |
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| I will review for a cookie. I think it's great! Keep up with it. Maybe you could help me with my dialogue in future? |
| gumboy |
03/22/05 - 05:11AM |
10: One night Pt. 1 |
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| Again good dialogue (Sorry, working backwards on your stories). Interesting story elements too. |
| gumboy |
03/22/05 - 05:08AM |
11: One Night Pt. 2 |
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Nice. Very Nice. You've got a great ear for dialogue. Dru's lines are perfect
Author's Response: Thank you. Dru's lines are the ones I was afraid I write the worst, but people keep telling me I write her well. |
| tamzinrose |
02/06/05 - 09:03AM |
9: Sydney's Tale |
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| I am reviewing. I would like a cookie. Wow! This is really good! Well done! Very funny too! Got all the characters just right! |
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