Reviews for When good girls go bad
| elastic_haiku |
11/26/04 - 11:58AM |
4: Best friends know these things |
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Really loving this story, especially how you open it in the first chapter; it just GRABS your attention. The one humble bit of advise, sinced you asked for input, you need to lace in some exposition about your villian so we get to know who...and what she is. Was she human, a sorcerer, a demon? Show some of her past. Anyway, a great idea for a bad guy...or girl. Fabs!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I realize taht i should put a little more of her in and I will. I may let you know little things about her throughout the story or I may let it out all in one chapter. I haven't decided yet. Thanks for the input! Please, keep reading! |
| frenchtoast101 |
11/25/04 - 08:00AM |
4: Best friends know these things |
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The cliffhanger in the last chapter was great! It's ok, that you forgot my penname-I forgive you!!!! Keep writing-it's really good. =)
Author's Response: I will keep writing. No doubt of that! Thanks. |
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