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filmtheory 01/10/05 - 06:04PM 1: meeting part one Signed
This is a good start to what could be a great long story, but it also works a s astand alone. Can't wait to see what else you have coming.

Revello1620 11/28/04 - 12:43PM 1: meeting part one Signed
There were some small errors, spelling, capitalization that sort of thing but nothing a good BETA couldn't fix. But your story was really good, you have a fertile imagination and a sense of your characters. All in all pretty nice!

Author's Response: thanx that was my first story so those mistakes will eventually get better. thanks for the suggestions
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