Reviews for The Past Is My Present
| Angellover |
02/07/05 - 11:35PM |
9: There's No Place Like Plrtz Glrb |
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Okay, I was all ready to go to bed and then you twisted my arm and made me read this chapter. You should be ashamed. Now my minds all funky fied and there's about a million little thoughts racing around in my head. BLAH!!! Anyways, this chapter was a little confusing for me. I don't know if it was just because I was tired or what but for some reason, and no I can't think of anything really specific, it was confusing. There were times that I wasn't really sure on who was talking to who and how Angel even got to Wolfram and Hart. Also, I swear, if Nicholas went through that portal and didn't stay behind even if he would be pulling the whole macho man thing by doing so... I'll hurt you pretty much if he doesn't come after her. Grr... Now I'm extremely tired. So... night and you better do good on the seqeul to this. There'll be a sequel right?
Author's Response: Sorry for the confusing-ness. I think I wrote that particular chappie at midnight, so...yeah. Speaks for itself. ...Heh-heh. The portal. I'm not saying anything about that. |
| Angellover |
02/07/05 - 11:24PM |
8: The Hero Thing |
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YOu had to make the whole shaking of the earth thing happen before the kiss! What's with that? The people that I'm rooting for to get together finally kind of get together and then you just go and... untogether them... I'm not really sure if that makes any sense what so ever but your usually pretty good at desiphering me. Anyways, besides that I loved this chapter. I expecially loved the whole talk between her and David on the Ghost Roads. Thanks for bringing that in by the way. There's just something about the Ghost Roads that I love and any story that even mentions them is considered good in my book... not that I actually have a book. Okay, I really need some sleep obviously because my rants are becoming way to confusing.
Author's Response: "Untogether"...likin' that word. Lol. And I know, the Ghost Roads should be in more stories. It's so...ethereal and kinda creepy, too. |
| Angellover |
02/07/05 - 11:07PM |
7: Decisions |
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Wow... that was... wow. The way you just kept going back and fourth between the memories and reality it was just... can I use wow again? Not afraid to emphasize the power of the wow here. :) Anyways, great job on Chapter 7. Also, I think I'm totally in love with Nicholas. But Angel still comes first :)
Oh, and I also really really love how you wrote Angelus in this chapter. It was so in character it was beginning to get scary. K, I'm done.
Author's Response: The power of the wow should never underestimated, lol. ^_^ |
| Angellover |
02/07/05 - 10:46PM |
6: Belonging |
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Well I've finally been able to sit down and actually read again. Something that I've been missing greatly. So when I sat down at my computer I was all like "I'm going to go see if Sabrina has updated her story". Yeah, I come here and realized that you've not only updated it, but you've finnished it. I have a lot of reading to do. But believe me when I say that this is a good thing. I really like I you put in some flash backs in this chapter and I also like how you're still sticking to the season 2 story line of Angel. I'm glad that you're not just going off into your own little world. This is a review for chapter 6 by the way if you haven't figured it out. Great job and now I'm off to read more.
Author's Response: I knew it! I checked my email, and there were five emails from SFA for reviews, and I said to myself, "I bet it's Dana." Thanks for the compliments, by the way. ^_^ |
| Michael J |
01/27/05 - 10:17PM |
9: There's No Place Like Plrtz Glrb |
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The story got off to a rocket start and quickly slowed down. I'm not sure how long you want to extend this, but if you're trying to keep Kat and Celia around for the duration of the Angel series timeline, you're dragging it out far far too long. Although it'd be interesting for Kat to see her 'older' brother born, trying to keep her around and working her into the series canon might start to lose steam after awhile. I was really hooked on the concept on the story, but once Angel found out she was his kid, the story kind of slowed down for me. Maybe it's me being impatient, but I think the pacing has slowed too much at the moment. Although seeing Kat react to Buffy's second death should be interesting, since Buffy would never tell her she'd already died twice.
Author's Response: Thanks for the input. It's always great to know what someone really thinks, even if it's not exactly what you want to hear. Only helps me make my story better, though. ^_^ It's funny, because I knew from the beginning exactly what was going to happen from when, and I can say that Katherine won't stick around in L.A. for all three years. She will leave for a good chunk of time, and then come back. I won't say for when or for why, though, but because you're getting restless, I'll tell you that much. ^_^ |
| rockangelz25 |
01/26/05 - 03:36PM |
10: Author's Note -- READ! |
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Great ending, as always. Does Katherine tell them that Buffy's going to come back? Because, otherwise, how would she exist? Hmmm.... Add the new story soon, please--can't wait to see it.
Author's Response: Heh, working on the first chapter right now. Glad you liked the ending. The action scenes would have been expanded, except I can't write a good fight scene to save my life. |
| rockangelz25 |
01/24/05 - 07:35PM |
1: Cryptic Girl |
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Holy crap.... Sorry! I've been reading this story whenever updated and loving it, and I never reviewed. It's a great fic--I love the thing with Buffy's two daughters, both being in the past and all. I can't wait to see what happens next--please update it again soon!!!
Author's Response: Lol. Thanky. ^_^ As soon as I finish my Chem homework, I plan to update. Hopefully, that will be soon. |
| Psyche2 |
01/21/05 - 08:09PM |
7: Decisions |
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Wow....wow....i am amazed and hooked on this story more so then the last chapter! U are an awesome writer and this idea is awesome! Please update asap!
Author's Response: All I can do is grin. :D |
| Psyche2 |
01/16/05 - 05:56PM |
6: Belonging |
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I love it! Long awaited yes...but worth the wait! I have an Idea.....how about Buffy while this is going on Buffy's fighting Buffy whats going to happen with that?!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it; I was afraid it was too short and just crappy. As for what's going on with Buffy, since this does take place in AtS S2/BtVS S5, right now Buffy and co. are dealing with Tara's lapse into insanity and Glory's discovery of Dawn being the Key. And, about that last little bit you said, I'm really sorry, but I have no idea what you mean. But you seem to really want Buffy to show up. You should keep in mind that this story takes place in Angel, not Buffy, so I'm going along with Angel's storylines. I'm probably going to rewrite "The Girl In Question" to actually include Buffy, but since that episode doesn't crop up until the end of the fifth season, Buffy most likely won't show up until then, either. Sorry. |
| Angellover |
01/15/05 - 06:25PM |
5: Windmills |
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I love this character so much. I think she has the perfect amount of her mother in her without making it seem super over the top. Plus, she's sarcastic so I tend to identifie with her a lot. I also really love the whole tall dark and handsom entering into play. Every story needs one of those, even if he's not exactly a good guy. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Hmm, the classic tall, dark, and handsome stranger. Well, you're right in saying that he's not exactly a good guy. But his situation's complicated. It's funny, because after I wrote the character, I realized how similar he is to Angel. Then I thought that it was weird for Katherine to fall for someone similar to her father. THEN I concluded that she just has some psychological issues, one being that she had never known her real father from when she was little, something she always wanted, so because she now knows Angel and practically hero-worships him (something that will become more pronounced in later chapters), she would want to be with someone who she feels as safe with and finds as cool as Angel. Hopefully that makes sense without making it seem like Kat has a thing for Angel, which I find wrong on so many levels. |
| Psyche2 |
01/04/05 - 12:26PM |
5: Windmills |
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This is awesome!!!! I love this can't wait to see what happens! Like I said before Awesome!!!! Thanks for the bonding! Can we see some more maybe talk about Buffy!?! Thats just a suggestion but it would be cool to see that!
Author's Response: Glad you liked the chapter. I was afraid it strayed too far from the actual Angel series. I'm not too sure how much talk of Buffy there will be, mainly because it's obviously hard on Angel, and it's also weird for Katherine, seeing as 'her' Buffy died so violently not too logn ago. Also, this takes place in AtS, not BtVS, and I'm going along with the seasons. But there might be a talk between Angel and Katherine that gives them some closure. |
| Psyche2 |
01/03/05 - 07:17PM |
1: Cryptic Girl |
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Please Write more!!! This was very good, maybe (as a suggestion) we can see more of Kathereine and Angel bonding, maybe more questions answered? Like why did Angel and Buffy leave eachother? Again? And more on what happened to him! Awesome story, keep writing!
Author's Response: There will be much more father-daughter moments, don't worry. And as for what happened with Buffy and Angel, I think I mentioned it in one of Katherine's flashbacks, when Oracle Cordelia and Oracle Doyle were talking about the prophecy. You might wanna re-read that part. I'm going to try to put a new chapter up soon, but with the mountain of schoolwork I've already gotten...well, I'll try. ^_^ |
| Michael J |
01/02/05 - 11:41PM |
3: Family Bonding |
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There's a writing style choice here that bothers me a bit. You'll have one character speak a line, then on the same paragraph, you'll type another character's reaction. It tends to make me forget who said what and the flow is interrupted a bit. It might just be me, but if you're getting that from other people, you may want to consider adjusting. Aside from that, my only complaint here is that this was too short. Angel learning that he has a daughter and trying to be super cool dad was sweet.
Author's Response: Thanks for the input; when I have time, I'll go over the story and see how I can make the flow a little easier. And the main reason the chapter was short was because (unfortunately) school's begun again and I didn't have time to make it as long as I wanted. |
| Angellover |
01/02/05 - 06:21PM |
3: Family Bonding |
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That was so cute. Angel meeting his daughter, Faith meeting her father. **huge grin**. Now update soon or else. **evil grin** Oh, and by the way, you totally just gave me an idea for later on in my story. You see, you write stuff like this and it get's me thinking and then I go completley insane and... well, this should be fun. Now stop reading this and go right more. Chop chop!
Author's Response: Isn't it funny to see Angel actually being (sorta) open to someone (other than Buffy). And, ooh, idea. I wonder what it is? ^_^ |
| Angellover |
01/02/05 - 06:10PM |
2: Sing Us A New One |
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I really liked this chapter. The flashbacks really helped with a better understanding of the characters. I really like how you had David being her best friend instead of her twin too. That isn't something you hear much about. I must say though that I was a little confused at first when you started calling her Faith. But everything made a lot more sense when she stated that that was just her middle name. I also like how you have Angel and Faith saying some of the same wordings to show how much alike they are. You're doing a great job and this is definatley going to be interesting.
Author's Response: I figured the flashbacks would have been helpful, and I thought that it was better for Katherine to have someone other than her sister as her best friend, because it'll be one more thing Celia hates her for. As for her middle name being Faith, well, if you'll notice the sisters' names: Celia, named after Buffy's cousin ("Killed by Death", 2.18); Katherine, named after Angel's sister; and her middle name Faith, obviously after our favourite Rogue Slayer. I wanted to mention it but didn't really see how it would fit, that Celia's middle name is Joyce. |
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