Reviews for Campus Life
| Angeldove |
01/05/06 - 02:41AM |
2: 2. After Midnight |
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I’m definitely enjoying the Angel/Connor camaraderie. It’s nice to see them in the relationship that we may have had the chance to see if the show hadn’t been canceled. And again, good job with everyone meeting each other, and the info we’ve been given on where everyone stands as far as knowledge of Connor’s existence . Again, you managed to keep it fun and informative. You are really great at keeping the prose to a minimum and allowing the dialogue to tell the story. I guess that is what makes you such a great screenwriter. You know me, I tend to tell too much through character reflection. I can’t wait to read on.
Author's Response: I’m looking for Connor to see Angel in an advisory capacity and, yeah, as his birth father. More on that in future chapters. But I’m a big fan of them building a relationship of sorts, so there’ll be more of that. There are a couple mysteries built in and Connor’s existence (and who knows what) is one of them. I don’t think character reflection and narration is a weakness, but I do depend to rely on dialogue to tell the story. Have I said how happy I am you’re back yet? Thanks again for reviewing. |
| Quortoth |
12/17/05 - 11:30PM |
2: 2. After Midnight |
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I like the way things are going. I don't think Buffy would be very okay with the Angel being Conner's dad part, I just get that feeling. Good Chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I cna't say whether BUffy will even find out about who Connor's dad is, because it would be a spoiler. Also, it's not really Buffy or Angel's story. The story belongs to Connor, Willow, Kennedy, and Dawn. I'm trying to concentrate on them and use the others as recurring guest stars. I hope the story'll keep your interest when they phase out for a while. |
| Angels Shadow |
10/11/05 - 10:23PM |
2: 2. After Midnight |
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I'm not really sure what else I can tell you that you haven't heard already, but WOW, this story has me completely blown away. You're an awesome writer - everything flows very well and its extremely enjoyable. Granted, I'm fairly new to the site, and I've only read the first two chapters, and, forgive me, but it'll take a few days to get through the next 20, but I am so looking forward to it. Awesome job, I totally love it so far!
Author's Response: Wow- thanks for the review. I hope you keep reading and enjoying. The first “season” will soon be complete, but some of the future chapters are PG-13 versions of some of the darker chapters. |
| angelsbabigurl08 |
04/02/05 - 02:13PM |
2: 2. After Midnight |
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Another absotivly posilutly fantastic chapter.I will be reviewing every one that I read.So be expecting a lot of reviews.
Author's Response: Wow- thanks! Your reviews are too, too kind and really keep me going. |
| adancer |
11/12/04 - 06:01PM |
2: 2. After Midnight |
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Ok love the story...excellent idea and love the D/C pairing! BUT Angel and Nina-in bed-frisky=me and all other B/A shippers SICK! But I will let that slip and leave it be.....GREAT FIC please write more!
Author's Response: As mentioned, the D/C pairing may come after a long and painful journey. Like Joss, I want to torture until you all squeal. Or at least grumble. As for you and all the other B/A shippers- you’ve had six years to come to grips with this. To quote Col. Trautman, “It’s over, Johnny!” Well . . . *maybe* it’s over. |
| jords |
11/11/04 - 11:39AM |
2: 2. After Midnight |
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This story just gets better. Your action sequences are very well written and easy for the reader to visualize. I particularly enjoyed the sequence with Buffy and Conner - should make for a night full of interesting discoveries.
Keep up the good work - I look forward to your next update!
Author's Response: Thanks again for the review. I'm glad my action sequences are still fresh to someone who's read around 25 of my chapters. This chapter was originally over 6,000 words, so I split it in two. The next chapter his mostly drama, romance, angst, etc. Oh, and "a night full of interesting discoveries"? You think I'd let you guys off the hook after just one chapter? Oh, no. This is going to take *much* longer. The next chapter should be up over the weekend or maybe next week. It'll depend on a few things. But thanks for reading! |
| crayonbreaky gal |
11/10/04 - 11:56AM |
2: 2. After Midnight |
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OK, another great action chapter from you. I really do like how you write action sequences. I'm envious. Buffy's gonna be so surprised when she finds out who Connor is. I really like the Dawn/Connor pairing too. Lots of sparkage. Are you going to bring any more characters in? I'm not sure who else would fit. Maybe Xander? Keep going on this. I'm liking it already.
Author's Response: I too really like the D/C pairing. That's probably where I'm heading with this, but you'll have to read on. Like Joss, I'm not letting anything happen easily. I want my characters and my readers to suffer through sadness and heartache. Then maybe I'll give them what they want. Maybe it depends on whether the network cancels my story. J/k. I may bring in other characters. Buffy will probably be leaving within a couple chapters, but may return to check up on little sis occasionally. Willow and Kennedy live in Palo Alto, so they'll be around. I'm not sure how much I'll use them, though. Obviously Angel will make appearances. I know one of other canon character who'll appear. But mostly I want to develop my set of original characters: Emily, Terry, Alyson, Craig. Connor has a roommate who'll eventually come into the story, but I'm not sure to what extent. Anyway, hope you keep reading and enjoying. Thanks so much for the review! |
| Poison Pen |
11/10/04 - 12:39AM |
2: 2. After Midnight |
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Action packed. Reads very quickly. Can't imagine Angel telling Conner "Nina's here in bed with me,"--seems like too much information, considering the character and the idea that Connor's his kid. Kind of an Eww moment for me there, but otherwise, a fine read. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. This was originally a very long chapter, so I split it in to two. this is the action part. next will be a drama part. Personally, when I call my parents and my father tells me my mom is bed next to him, it doesn't Eww me at all. I came to terms with the fact my parents sleep in the same bed a long time ago. What I was trying to convey there is that Connor's relationship with Angel is much more healthy and natural then it was in season 4. I'm glad you're looking forward to more. I'm hoping to make this like "Running on Faith" and have 22 chapters to mirror a 22 episode tv season. |
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