Reviews for Running on Faith, Season Two
| Quortoth |
02/12/06 - 01:23PM |
2: 2.02: Tomorrow Belongs to . . . |
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Another great chapter, I didn't expect Conner and Angel to ever go fishing :-P. I like how Conner fishes. And then eating the raw fish, great, weird, but great.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Yeah, I kind of like to play up the "fich out of water" aspect with Connor. Angel trying to do normal father/son things and Connor not understanding them. I thik there's a lot of untapped comic potential there. |
| Selene |
04/15/05 - 06:23PM |
2: 2.02: Tomorrow Belongs to . . . |
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“Ohhhh,” Faith said with a grin. “I see. This is like when mom used to say she hoped someday I’d have a kid like me so I could see what it was like.” Love this line! Who hasn't heard in one form or another from their mom.
I hope that Faith softens up a little on Connor. I really enjoyed where you took his character from the last season and she was there though most of it. There are many sympathetic issues that she may be able to help him out on as pointed out by Giles. (Love how you portrayed him btw) Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. You're so sweet! Yes, we've all gotten the "someday you'll have a kid likeyou" line. Connor is Faith's Faith. I plan on spending some time on Faith's relationship with Connor. I'm glad you like how Giles was portrayed. I was worried I didn't do him well. |
| gumboy |
03/30/05 - 08:22AM |
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"I just want you to know, that when we get back to the hotel and I kick your ass, I’m going to kick it in a caring and sensitive way."
Very cool line! You did an excellent job of nailing down Giles character and I have to say I really like what you are doing with Connor. The image of a kid with a Prince Valiant hair cut eating worms and raw fish was definitely a laugh out loud moment. (As was Spike's final comment to the priest).
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Faith and Spike are pretty much just fonts of good lines. Connor as fish out of water is also always good for some comedy mileage. Later I try to do something about Connor’s hair, so hopefully the Prince Valiant mullet won’t be around too long- lol. Thanks again. I hope you keep reading. |
| Revello1620 |
11/29/04 - 10:38AM |
2: 2.02: Tomorrow Belongs to . . . |
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I really liked tHe Xander "I was trying to be funny Xander" line." Classic! Plus the whole raw fish on the sofa thingy, very eeew... But I like what I have read so far, your still brilliant!
Author's Response: EEk- thanks! I'm glad raw fish on the sofa grossed you out! You have to figure Connor's still a little screwed in the head. Xander will keep trying to be funny Xander.And I'll kkeep trying to be brilliant- lol. |
| Painbow |
11/10/04 - 11:42AM |
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I really liked the Giles/Connor moment at the end. It showed more of the pre-S7 "First" Giles, which I missed. Also, the Angel/Connor bonding scene.
I really like where season 2 is going so far. Can't wait to see Faith trying to mentor Connor...
Author's Response: I really enjoyed reading the Angel/Connor bonding scene, so I’m particularly happy people liked reading it. I’m with you on Giles. Hopefully season 2 will keep your attention. |
| jords |
11/10/04 - 08:20AM |
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My continued effusive fangirl squeeing for your story! Not only do you write the action sequences extaordinarily well, your dialogue is some of the very best I have come across. I look forward to reading more - please update soon!
Author's Response: Glad I could make you squeal :) The next chapter is almost done. It was pretty much written, but some feedback convinced me to change it a little. I just hope I don't have too many characters in here. |
| somnambulist29 |
11/09/04 - 05:08PM |
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Guess whose back? lol, great way to start off the new season! I love how everything is turning out. I like the way you are writting for each character.. you know exactly how the real writters would write for them. Great story line so far! Poor Xad, he needs to get some.. fast... Faith and Spike... I like it. lol, even if there is nothing there I like the "sexual banter". It's really funny. Keep it up!
Author's Response: And welcome back! I was hope to start the new season with a bang. I’m trying to maintain the Little Bad/ Big Bad system the show worked so well. This year, I start with the mini-bad. Then we’ll see if I can do a Small Bad to Little Bad to Big Bad. Basically, I have four sets of villains I’d love to work in this season, starting with the Jasmine demons. I’m really happy to hear I’m hitting the characters well. As for Spaith, stay tuned. We’ll see what happens. |
| crayonbreaky gal |
11/08/04 - 03:11PM |
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Lots of battle already and in great style. I'm still loving the way you handle Faith. Since she's one of my favorite characters, I tend to be critical, but you have her down perfectly. Typical Connor broodiness. And I loved the scene with Angel and Connor bonding. And Xander wanting some love. I feel so sorry for him. It has been a long time since he had a girlfriend. Not fair. I hope you're fair to him in this fic. Looking forward to reading more. I'm liking this even more than the last. You've hit your stride on this.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I’m glad I did you proud with my Faith. The Connor broodiness will of course continue, but probably go in a different direction. I thought the Angel/Connor bonding could be heart-warming and funny. The original plan was to be decidedly unfair to Xander, but reviewer outpouring has me reconsidering and rewriting. Glad I hit my stride. |
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