Reviews for Hank
| filmtheory |
11/13/04 - 12:40AM |
2: Chapter Two |
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Hank, the selfish bastard who doesn’t call his ex-wife or kids for over a year, so deserved this. Dawn’s descent into kleptomania speeds up. That was smart, remembering that! Hank having the hots for Willow was hysterical, especially considering he’s so sure he would have “landed” her. “I’ll just clean up” is the perfect last line. Hank is definitely trying to clean up his mess.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Oh yeah, Hank totally deserves it, but I'm also trying to see if I can redeem him...I mean, if a merry nun rapist (Angel...and I'm totally stealing the description from another author, crazydiamondsue) can be redeemed, then why not Hank? Of course...he gets lumps ahoy for being completely self-centered and, well, a terrible father.
The Willow scene was so fun to write, because Hank, in my brain, is just so totally oblivious and sure of himself and Willow wouldn't go for him in a million years even if she wasn't Gay!Now. |
| faith_slayer89 |
11/07/04 - 08:24PM |
2: Chapter Two |
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Another winning chapter. I think that Dawn's reaction and thoughts about her 'father' are perfect, and I like how the money thing tied into her kleptomania. The thing with Willow just goes to show what a jerk their father is, but I guess he's trying, so, ehh. Post part 3 soon. ^_^
Author's Response: Yeah, I always thought Dawn would be really angry if he ever came back. I missed protective Willow in Season 6, so I thought I'd bring her back *g* |
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