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Reviews for Where Have you been?




Revello1620 01/03/05 - 08:09PM 3: A vampire's way of hiding Signed
Your backstory is amazing, some really great detail work in there :)

Poison Pen 11/07/04 - 11:05PM 3: A vampire's way of hiding Signed
An interesting start. I hope you plan on finishing! As for suggestions, I recommend running through for punctuation--commas, apostrophe's, that type of thing. Adding where needed will improve the flow of the story. Looking forward to seeing where you go with this. :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I know about the grammer I looked over it the other day. I'll fix it when I get a chance. Is there anything u would like to see? Any characters? Well thanks for reviewing hope you enjoy the rest.
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