Reviews for Campus Life
| Willow Fireheart |
11/12/04 - 07:06AM |
1: Full Moon on the Quad |
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I loved it! It's a great idea.
Is the werewolf thing going to take up the whole story, besides the D/C thing? Or will there be other monsters?
I love Dawn/Connor pairings and you're writing it really well. I love that you've thrown in parts of his life before the memory wipe and after.
Also, another thing i really like is that Angel and Buffy aren't together. Although i didn't really like Nina, i think that too much has happened for them to get together. But even if you do end up having them get back together i'm sure that you'll do it well.
The actions scenes rocked.
Can't wait to see the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading, reviewing, and most of all loving my story. The werewolf thing will take up a few chapters, but not the whole story. I think it will be a major theme, though. College is a time of change and self-discovery. I imagine turning into a werewolf is the same. But yes, there will be other monsters. I love D/C pairings, too. I definitely want to set it up so that people will want them together. Then I’m going to make things hard as hell on you. Sorry, but I’m a bit of a bastard. I tend to think Angel and Buffy are too screwed up to go on, too. But I’ll see where the story takes me. Thanks for your compliments on the action scenes. They’re apparently my specialty, or so I’m told. |
| jords |
11/11/04 - 10:51AM |
1: Full Moon on the Quad |
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Another great story? My god, when do you sleep???
I like the premise that you have set out here, it's very canon in feel while allowing you to have fun with the unknown. I particularly enjoyed Dawn and Conner's repoire.
I did notice a few typos, and wanted to call them out in case you wanted to recode.
“And I hear you say you’ll de kissy kissy on the quad. " **Do, not de**
She wanted to fell sexy. **Feel, not fell**
Anyway, hope this helps. Great story thus far, I am off to read more!
Author's Response: Obviously I have time to sleep because I spend so little time proof-reading, lol. I thought college is as good a metaphor as high school and would help keep with the theme of the first three seasons of Buffy. College is a time to kind of discover who you are or who you're going to be. Who needs to take that journey more than Connor and Dawn? Connor has two past lives and isn't sure if he'll be a doctor or a demon fighter. Dawn is the little girl made of light who's only existed a handful of years but has 17 years worth of memories. She grew up (or she *remembers* growing up) in her sister's shadow and is now trying to break free of that. You also have all of the hormones and possibly more of the heartbreak and drama of high school. I hope I can keep your attention and prove worthy of your praise. |
| Poison Pen |
11/08/04 - 11:48PM |
1: Full Moon on the Quad |
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Very intriguing so far. Hope Alyson gets mauled by the werewolf—oops! Did I say that out loud? Don’t know where that came from. Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: You *already* hope Alyson gets mauled by a werewolf?! LOL. And thanks for the review! |
| crayonbreaky gal |
11/08/04 - 03:13PM |
1: Full Moon on the Quad |
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When I started reading this, I was like oh this is so true to life about college. And I really like the Dawn/Connor pairing. I hope you concentrate on them. I really don't mind that Buffy and Angel aren't together. That's OK. I hope Connor gets to kick some demon a**. I'm sure he will. I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I wanted this to be true to life about college, so it means so much that you think that. Yes, I will concentrate on Dawn/Connor, but we’re not going to get there easily. And yes, Connor will get to kick some demon a**. |
| faith_slayer89 |
11/05/04 - 07:12PM |
1: Full Moon on the Quad |
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This story's good so far. I like how you didn't have Dawn and Connor have this weird, mysterious spark (for lack of a better phrase) for each other, like Buffy did. My only complaint is that Angel's still dating Nina, that Buffy's still apparently with each other, and that Angel and Buffy aren't together. But, minorly insignificant. Can't wait to read the rest!
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm not a huge fan of the big spark on both sides. Like BtVS, I want to fill the story with unrequited love and heartbreak. As for Angel and Buffy, you'll have to keep your fingers crossed. The story's not over yet. Although they won't be in the story too much, they'll still be around. |
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