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CelesteAvonne	05/16/06 - 07:36PM	1: Full Moon on the Quad	Signed
I finally got the chance to read the first chapter. An excellent beginning. I'm looking forward to reading more. I really like your characterization of Connor. Looking forward to reading more. I loved this line, too. Author's Response: Thanks for reading and for the review. I hope the rest of the story can keep you as interested as the first chapter did. I’m glad you liked how Connor was portrayed. I kind of liked that kid we met at the end of Angel season 5 and I wanted to run with him and see where I could take his story.

slayerfest	04/29/06 - 07:56PM	1: Full Moon on the Quad	Signed
This is a gorgeous fiction. I was looking through the Lie to Me Awards earlier this month and I noticed it had won an award or two. Rightfully so. I've only read the first chapter, but I can already tell it's going to be absolutely fantastic. You've written Connor very well; more witty than sarcastic. There are a couple of simple gramatical things in the first chapter: "Dan I've gotta go" in the last paragraph, and Dawn's statement regarding not being downwind while talking to Connor doesn't make sense to me. I only mention these because the rest of the chapter is meticulous in spelling and grammar (extremely appreciated by the way) and I figured since that's my only critisism you'd probably appreciate it. Again, I'll keep reading. It's truly splendid. Author's Response: Wow! Thanks so much for your review. I was worried how this story would be received given that I’m basing it around Connor, Dawn, Kennedy, and Willow. The first three characters are probably the three most hated in the Buffyverse. However, I felt the show never did enough with those three. That’s why I wanted to run with them. That’s also why I’m so very pleased that you like my characterization of Connor. Thanks for the tip on the typo. The “downwind” line was about Connor’s vampire-like sense of smell. He noticed Dawn’s perfume despite the fact she wasn’t wearing much. He explained his ability to smell it by saying he was downwind of her. She did the thing with licking her thumb to figure out which way the wind was blowing. This revealed Connor was lying as he was not actually downwind of her. Thanks again!

Fedia	02/22/06 - 09:13PM	1: Full Moon on the Quad	Signed
Hey. I just finished the first chapter. It's a bit too soon to voice my mind, although I've always prefered the darker version of Connor. I'll keep going anyway. Author's Response: I like the darker Connor, too. But I still like Connor 2.5 as I like to call him. Seemingly normal, but with a worl of horrible memories inside of him. I hoe you enjoy the rest of the story. Thanks for the review.

Angeldove	01/05/06 - 02:40AM	1: Full Moon on the Quad	Signed
I know it's been awhile, but I am glad to be back and reading my favorite writer's works of art. Congrats on the awards btw. Now, on to my review: Ok, loved the line, “Any city’s exciting until you do laundry there” laughed out loud at that one. Also, the mix of action with the well, ‘action on the Quad’ was great. And of course being a fan of the Dawn and Conner relationship (did I maybe give that away in my last story?) It was very nice. I like your portrayal of Dawn. Very different from mine, which is great! You would think it would bother me, but I really like her having the confidence & making the first move. It’s the Dawn we got to see in season seven’s “Him” In this first chapter you were able to show us exactly what had happened in the Buffyverse up to this point, and where we as the audience were coming in. Just great! Author's Response: The return of Angeldove! I’ve so desperately missed your reviews and stories. Hopefully you’ll be writing your stories again as well. Thanks for the review and the award congrats. I’m also glad you liked the laundry line. That was something I told my wife about Hawaii and I really believe it. It’s as close to a credo as I can get. I’m glad you like my Dawn, because she and Connor are the main characters in this story with Willow in the Giles role. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story as much as this chapter. Thanks again for the review. Author's Response: The return of Angeldove! I’ve so desperately missed your reviews and stories. Hopefully you’ll be writing your stories again as well. Thanks for the review and the award congrats. I’m also glad you liked the laundry line. That was something I told my wife about Hawaii and I really believe it. It’s as close to a credo as I can get. I’m glad you like my Dawn, because she and Connor are the main characters in this story with Willow in the Giles role. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story as much as this chapter. Thanks again for the review. I'm soooo happy to have you back.

Quortoth	12/17/05 - 09:02PM	1: Full Moon on the Quad	Signed
“Can you get a tranquilizer gun?” Angel asked. “Sure,” Connor said sarcastically. “The book store sells them. Right between the sweatshirts and the text books.-- I love this so far, you've pulled me into the fic as well. I'm pulled in and going to read another. Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad the funny lines worked for you. I'm always worried the humor won't translate in print. I'm also glad that I pulled you into the story. Hopefully I can keep you captivated.

BelovedSlayer	12/09/05 - 01:02AM	1: Full Moon on the Quad	Signed
hey there. when is this great fic ever gonna update?? he he. i hope its really soon cuz i wanna read what happens next!! Author's Response: I plan on updating soon, but I'm having some writer's block on this issue.

BelovedSlayer	11/15/05 - 06:19PM	1: Full Moon on the Quad	Signed
ok maybe i was being a bit hard on Buffy for being pissed at her dad lol i completely understand how she felt though because i went through that once when i was little. anyways i feel better admitted it because i agreed with the other readers about her being so angry. but other than that, will Dawn and Connor get together any time soon? They're perfect for each other and i can't believe Connor doesn't feel that way. that is the whole reason why alot of men confused me especially Connor himself lol!! I hope they will get together soon only if you update quickly and i have to ask. is there a new chappie up already because i didn't see a new one unless you only added a few sentences for one of the chappies. thanx update soon!! Author's Response: I plan to be like Joss. I'll give you what you want, but not the way you want it. What? I don't know. It's something about a monkey's paw. The chapter thing was due to a screw up where I added a chapter to the wrong story. D'Oh! Sorry about that. The next chapter shouldn't be too, too long/ But I can't say for sure. Tahnbks again for reading and reviewing.

BelovedSlayer	11/04/05 - 11:13PM	1: Full Moon on the Quad	Signed
I just got finished reading the entire fic and this is the first one i read by you and i can see why alot of people read it. what can i say? it's really really really damn good!! Very long fic indeed but i really like it alot nonetheless. i wish i can kick my own ass for not reading this fantastically awesome fic earlier on but im glad i did lol. Even though i consider connor and dawn to be such brats, i kinda felt for them in this fic when i read it. im glad finally i gotten the chance to read this fic top to bottom although it took me almost 2 hours to read the entire thing lol!! For that though, im adding this to my faves and i wonder whats gonna happen with Buffy's father since we really don't get to see him alot on the show im excited to know what happens next. All i gotta say is this: Awesome job you did and i really like the way you wrote it you did such a perfect job on this. now i only ask is that you update really soon please!! Author's Response: Wow- thanks for reading and for the review. I've always had a soft spot for hard-luck cases, so I have a lot of sympathy for Connor. As for Dawn, she was just immature. I think that makes her great material to mold into a better character. Plus, there were many abandonment issues with her as well. I hope to update before too long, but I'm working on a couple other stories at the same time. But thanks again for reading.

dutchgirl	10/24/05 - 11:02AM	1: Full Moon on the Quad	Signed
I really like your stories!! Connor is one off my favorite characters!! and I think you write the characters very well in a compelling and interesting story-line. I specially like the angel-connor 'convercations', there weren't enough off those in the show!! Englisch is not my first language (I'm from Holland) so forgive for any grammar mistakes! hope you update soon!! Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you like Connor. He was my fabvorite character and I felt like he got a raw deal on the show. I hope you continue to read and emjoy. Thanks again!

jl1980	09/23/05 - 12:11AM	1: Full Moon on the Quad	Signed
Wow! Great story, coherent story line, sharp dialogue...someone said your story would make a good spin-off and now I see why! :) I've just written my first fic and I can't quite get the dialogue down...lol...would appreciate any input you could give me on that :) Again, great story, thanx for writing! Author's Response: Please- I should be saying Wow! Your review is just too damn nice. I hope you keep reading and enjoying. I also hope someone from the WB checks the site and take the spin off idea. I’d love to see Connor and Dawn in college. Thanks again for the review.

always angel	08/06/05 - 02:25AM	1: Full Moon on the Quad	Signed
Holy Crap! I definatly wasn't expecting that! Update soon please. Author's Response: Glad to surprise you. Thanks for the review!

Shay	07/19/05 - 08:10PM	1: Full Moon on the Quad	Signed
Wow...really good. I love your dialouge, I wish I could write it as well as you! I think this may be one of the most well written fan fics I have ever had the pleasure of reading. Good job! Author's Response: Thanks for the review! You''re really too, too nice. I'm glad that you like the fic. I hope you keep reading. Thanks again.

LuVAtSBtvS	07/19/05 - 07:28PM	1: Full Moon on the Quad	Signed
Very Cool! I like it! Author's Response: Thanks. I hope you keep reading (and liking).

angelsbabigurl08	05/27/05 - 05:41PM	1: Full Moon on the Quad	Signed
When are you going to update. I wanna know what happens.Now I'm sounding like a two year old so I'm going to stop and trust that you will make the right decision and update ASAP. Author's Response: Poor Connor. A daddy again. And it’s pretty clear the evil, mystical, powers-that-be mojo action is going on here. Either that, or he really is a great big jerk. Can’t wait to find out. Author's Response: Sorry- that last response was a review for a story, not a response to this review. Man, I wich I could delte those. Anyway, I hope to update soon. However, work, school, and a script are keeping me from writing as much fanfic as I'd like. Thanks for your continued interest.

angelsbabigurl08	04/02/05 - 01:55PM	1: Full Moon on the Quad	Signed
Wow.That was totally fantabulous. So much happened in just that one chapter.I can't wait to go read more.Yes that was just for the first chapter but I just started reading it.Well I really liked it so keep up the good work because I know it'll keep me reading this story. Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad the first chapter was exciting. I hope I can keep you hooked.

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