Reviews for Campus Life
| BelovedSlayer |
11/14/05 - 01:11AM |
24: 21. Compartmentalize |
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I have to say Buffy pretty much annoyed me in this chappie because she was acting like a selfish bitch to her father although i know exactly how she feels about him. I think that part for me was the most interesting and hopefully something either good or bad will happen between father and daughter pretty soon although i have to admit, Hank being there made things a bit awkward. great chappie and hopefully you'll update really soon.
Author's Response: I was hoping Buffy would come off as more sympathetic than she did for you. I mean, the guy didn't even come to her mother's funeral. Hank presence wil probablyl be awkward in the next chapter as well. Other than have him argue with Buffy and ingratiate himself with Dawn, I really don't have much to do with him. Thanks for the review. They are always appreciated :) |
| BelovedSlayer |
11/04/05 - 11:13PM |
1: Full Moon on the Quad |
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I just got finished reading the entire fic and this is the first one i read by you and i can see why alot of people read it. what can i say? it's really really really damn good!! Very long fic indeed but i really like it alot nonetheless. i wish i can kick my own ass for not reading this fantastically awesome fic earlier on but im glad i did lol. Even though i consider connor and dawn to be such brats, i kinda felt for them in this fic when i read it. im glad finally i gotten the chance to read this fic top to bottom although it took me almost 2 hours to read the entire thing lol!! For that though, im adding this to my faves and i wonder whats gonna happen with Buffy's father since we really don't get to see him alot on the show im excited to know what happens next. All i gotta say is this: Awesome job you did and i really like the way you wrote it you did such a perfect job on this. now i only ask is that you update really soon please!!
Author's Response: Wow- thanks for reading and for the review. I've always had a soft spot for hard-luck cases, so I have a lot of sympathy for Connor. As for Dawn, she was just immature. I think that makes her great material to mold into a better character. Plus, there were many abandonment issues with her as well. I hope to update before too long, but I'm working on a couple other stories at the same time. But thanks again for reading. |
| always angel |
11/01/05 - 12:48AM |
23: 20. I Still Only Have Eyes For You |
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Wow, great chapter. I hope Buffy and Angel can finally have a happy ending..but they probably wont. I really felt for Connor this chapter and it made me tear up when he wanted to sleep in Emily's bed.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and for reviewing. Both are appreciated. I kind of want Connor to keep unwinding emotionally. Mostly because I'm a sadist. Just kidding. I just hate how, on the show, some characters died and it was tragic for about a week. I'd like the repercussions of this death to reverberate throughout the series (though not in every chapter/ episode of course). Thanks again for your continued reading! |
| spideygirl |
10/31/05 - 10:36PM |
23: 20. I Still Only Have Eyes For You |
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Great start of the chapter with Willow and Kennedy kissing each other passionately. I always find the both of them really interesting. I never expect Willow to be a lesbian in Joss Whedon series and I miss Tara so much. Connor still grieving with Emily's death. He such a devoted guy, well I guess he really love her. So..who's haunting Connor?? Hmm..good I like this kind of suspense, make me wanna read more..so pls next chapter, thank you :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Hot lesbian action is always a big draw, so I figured starting with a Willow/ Kennedy make out session was the way to go. Connor will continue to grieve for Emily. I hate how, on the shows, someone would die and after a short time it didn't seem to bother anyone. (After "Amends", does anyone remember any mention of Jenny Calendar?). However, he will eventually move on with his life. Provided, of course, that I write a second season. |
| axel |
10/30/05 - 11:47PM |
23: 20. I Still Only Have Eyes For You |
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Buffy, and Angel finnaly get there happy ending, as long as nothing goes wrong (jinx) I was glad to see Kennedy beat up Connor (not that I don't like Connor, just after what he did to her, she deserved some payback) Keep it up.
Author's Response: Teh story really isn't Buffy and Angel's story. It belongs to Connor, Dawn, Willow, and Kennedy. I wanted to give them a happy ending if I could, but I don't plan on following them off into the sunset. Unlike Connor with Kennedy, Kennedy hurt Connor for his own good, not revenge. So in a way, Connor may still have some payback coming. |
| spideygirl |
10/29/05 - 09:14PM |
22: 19. I Grieve |
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Hi again, another one of your good stories. Keep it up. I like the conversation of Connor with his adopted mother, Colleen. She tried to comfort him and convince him that his girlfriend's death wasn't his fault. That's what mothers always do right which is very sweet of her. Wow didn't expect Angel to sob in front of Laurence. Angel must be really worried about Connor. Hmm..so next chapter pls but no rush =) Tks!
Author's Response: Thanks for another one of your good reviews :). I really enjoy writing the family scenes, so the Connor/ Colleen scene was a favorite of mine as well. Angel sobbing, well, he's human now and should probably start acting like it. |
| dutchgirl |
10/24/05 - 11:02AM |
1: Full Moon on the Quad |
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I really like your stories!! Connor is one off my favorite characters!! and I think you write the characters very well in a compelling and interesting story-line. I specially like the angel-connor 'convercations', there weren't enough off those in the show!! Englisch is not my first language (I'm from Holland) so forgive for any grammar mistakes! hope you update soon!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you like Connor. He was my fabvorite character and I felt like he got a raw deal on the show. I hope you continue to read and emjoy. Thanks again! |
| Angels Shadow |
10/11/05 - 10:23PM |
2: 2. After Midnight |
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I'm not really sure what else I can tell you that you haven't heard already, but WOW, this story has me completely blown away. You're an awesome writer - everything flows very well and its extremely enjoyable. Granted, I'm fairly new to the site, and I've only read the first two chapters, and, forgive me, but it'll take a few days to get through the next 20, but I am so looking forward to it. Awesome job, I totally love it so far!
Author's Response: Wow- thanks for the review. I hope you keep reading and enjoying. The first “season” will soon be complete, but some of the future chapters are PG-13 versions of some of the darker chapters. |
| axel |
09/23/05 - 07:39PM |
22: 19. I Grieve |
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What did Amy know, She's never say. And Connor finaly excepts his Destiny, We think. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Amy tried to say what she knew, but it didn't work out for her. You're close on the Connor thing. He's accepted what he believes is his purpose, but as Amy said, his destiny is yet to be decided. |
| Wolfkin |
09/23/05 - 01:54AM |
22: 19. I Grieve |
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This is one of my favorite stories on this site and this update is not a let down. Thank you for Amy, by the way. After her tricks in The Killer In Me, I always enjoy her getting what's coming to her! Also, thank you for keeping Willow and Kennedy together. I hope they work out any problems in the coming chapters. Impatiently waiting for the next part, so hurry please!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Glad to hear this is one of your favorite stories. I was afraid that the big action opening and the slow, emotional ending would be a bad juxtaposition. Unfortunately, too much is about to happen for me to mix anything in with this chapter. I’ll actually miss Amy. She was one of my go-to villains. Still, every villain must have her day. As for Willow and Kennedy . . . stay tuned. |
| jl1980 |
09/23/05 - 12:11AM |
1: Full Moon on the Quad |
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Wow! Great story, coherent story line, sharp dialogue...someone said your story would make a good spin-off and now I see why! :)
I've just written my first fic and I can't quite get the dialogue down...lol...would appreciate any input you could give me on that :) Again, great story, thanx for writing!
Author's Response: Please- I should be saying Wow! Your review is just too damn nice. I hope you keep reading and enjoying. I also hope someone from the WB checks the site and take the spin off idea. I’d love to see Connor and Dawn in college. Thanks again for the review. |
| rockangelz25 |
08/08/05 - 08:08PM |
21: 18. The Hunted |
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Ooh. Does the leader know what he's making these kids do? Has he really turned that..... Evil, for lack of a better word? Is Connor going to stay relatively sane? Are we going to see anymore backlash from the Connor/Dawn/Emily triangle, or the Connor/Emily/anybody triangles? And what's going to happen when the pack leader is confronted with the consequences?..... Oooh...... Update again soon, please.
Author's Response: Oh, you KNOW I can’t answer those questions here. Well, except one. I can’t say that Connor will stay relatively sane. Just as Angel always struggled with Angelus, both in terms of his past and the demon within, Connor 2.1 will struggle with both the ghosts of Connor 1.0 and the inner anger. Also, yes. Backlash galore from the Connor/Dawn/Emily triangle. I will work on updating again, but I’m knocking out the next chapter of RoF at the moment. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. |
| always angel |
08/06/05 - 02:25AM |
1: Full Moon on the Quad |
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Holy Crap! I definatly wasn't expecting that! Update soon please.
Author's Response: Glad to surprise you. Thanks for the review! |
| axel |
08/05/05 - 12:54PM |
21: 18. The Hunted |
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The werewolf leader is (well, I can't say who he is, or ruin the suprize). Was he behind what happened to Willow to, I wonder, who'd have thought. You are the best writer on this site, and we all know it. by the way, remind me not to piss Connor off.
Author's Response: LMFAO- Thanks. And thanks. And sure, I'll remind you not to piss off Connor. I don't think it's a spoiler to say that the werewolf leader isn't behind what happened to Willow. However, by the end of the season, I hope to have many things connected. |
| gumboy |
08/05/05 - 08:35AM |
21: 18. The Hunted |
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Holy CRAP! I mean... really!!! HOLY CRAP!!!
Okay... The first line about Harris calling, that was enough to make me go "COOL!" but the ending? With the interrogation? With Terry's Answer?!!
HOLY CRAP!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. You really are way, way too nice to me. I'm glad you liked my twists and can only hope I keep you coming back. Thanks again! |
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