Reviews for Campus Life
| Quortoth |
12/17/05 - 11:59PM |
11: 9. Waking Up Is Hard to Do |
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I thought the confusing part made it funny. Star Trek, she's been hanging out with Andrew too long. Good story.
Author's Response: Yeah, i thought a Star Trek/ Andrew reference would work well in the story. Thanks for reviewing. |
| Quortoth |
12/17/05 - 11:45PM |
12: 9. Waking Up Is Hard to Do (PG-13) |
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Dawn's dream is suspenseful. I like that. I thought Tracey was out of the picture, I guess not. Good one once again.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Tracy is kind of in and kind of out of the picture. She's still a firend and I think there's still a physical attraction. I want to get more into the Connor/ Tracy relationship in later chapters. |
| Quortoth |
12/17/05 - 11:42PM |
9: 7. When It’s Over |
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Oh my, don't care about Dawn's feelings [I like Dawn just fine...] Emily just dropped him, good friend but... Still I'm terribly entertained. These stories are exciting to read. :-)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading, reviewing, and for being excited. Hope I can keep you entertained! |
| Quortoth |
12/17/05 - 11:38PM |
8: 6. Mausoleum |
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I've never thought about Conner dressing up as Harry Potter. Interesting, I'm a big Harry Potter fan, I just I never thought about that, he being the dress up type. See what a little less thought on Cordelia will do to a guy :-P :-)
Author's Response: LOL- thanks for the kind and funny review. I think Connor as Harry Potter would work. There's a similarity in the hair, I think. Thanks again! |
| Quortoth |
12/17/05 - 11:35PM |
7: 5. Two Moons |
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I don't know why, I still like Emily. I get a sort of satifaction from her not having Conner. I don't understand it but, this story is working for me.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I'm glad you like Emily. I like her myself, actually, but most of my readers don't. |
| Quortoth |
12/17/05 - 11:32PM |
3: 3. Morning After Syndrome |
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I didn't think she'd 'move' that fast. Nope. I'm going to read the others.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. As you read on, you'll see the reason she "moves" that fast. |
| Quortoth |
12/17/05 - 11:30PM |
2: 2. After Midnight |
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I like the way things are going. I don't think Buffy would be very okay with the Angel being Conner's dad part, I just get that feeling. Good Chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I cna't say whether BUffy will even find out about who Connor's dad is, because it would be a spoiler. Also, it's not really Buffy or Angel's story. The story belongs to Connor, Willow, Kennedy, and Dawn. I'm trying to concentrate on them and use the others as recurring guest stars. I hope the story'll keep your interest when they phase out for a while. |
| Quortoth |
12/17/05 - 09:53PM |
6: 4. Issues of Timing (PG-13) |
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I'm liking this character, Emily. I'd like to know more about what she looks like please.
Author's Response: I'm surprised I didn't put more about Em's looks 8in there. I guess I wanted people to picture someone they thought was attractive. Thanks for reviewing. |
| Quortoth |
12/17/05 - 09:02PM |
1: Full Moon on the Quad |
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“Can you get a tranquilizer gun?” Angel asked.
“Sure,” Connor said sarcastically. “The book store sells them. Right between the sweatshirts and the text books.-- I love this so far, you've pulled me into the fic as well. I'm pulled in and going to read another.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad the funny lines worked for you. I'm always worried the humor won't translate in print. I'm also glad that I pulled you into the story. Hopefully I can keep you captivated. |
| BelovedSlayer |
12/09/05 - 01:02AM |
1: Full Moon on the Quad |
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hey there. when is this great fic ever gonna update?? he he. i hope its really soon cuz i wanna read what happens next!!
Author's Response: I plan on updating soon, but I'm having some writer's block on this issue. |
| spideygirl |
11/16/05 - 09:43AM |
24: 21. Compartmentalize |
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Wow, Buffy is a little harsh to Hank but come to think about it, I think I would do that if I have a father like Hank. What Connor said to Angel was a truth fact that it was a bit too late now to be acting like his father. I mean Angel wasn't there for him when he needed Angel. Anyway, I like the bonding part where both sat down and talk, not everything but at least they did talk. Dawn has been letting Connor sleep in her dorm, that's sweet of her, but she did like Connor right ya so I guess she would do that for him. So, con't the next chapter please and thank you.
Author's Response: I don't think BUffy was overly harsh. Hank has pretty consistently let her down. My big thing is that he didnt even come to Joyce's funeral, nor did he support Buffy and Dawn after Joyce died. Semi-bonding between Angel and Connor was nice. However, with both Angel and Hank, I'm going to try to make the point that it's never too late to start acting like an adult. Or a father. We'll see how that plays out. Thanks for the review. |
| BelovedSlayer |
11/15/05 - 06:19PM |
1: Full Moon on the Quad |
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ok maybe i was being a bit hard on Buffy for being pissed at her dad lol i completely understand how she felt though because i went through that once when i was little. anyways i feel better admitted it because i agreed with the other readers about her being so angry. but other than that, will Dawn and Connor get together any time soon? They're perfect for each other and i can't believe Connor doesn't feel that way. that is the whole reason why alot of men confused me especially Connor himself lol!! I hope they will get together soon only if you update quickly and i have to ask. is there a new chappie up already because i didn't see a new one unless you only added a few sentences for one of the chappies. thanx update soon!!
Author's Response: I plan to be like Joss. I'll give you what you want, but not the way you want it. What? I don't know. It's something about a monkey's paw. The chapter thing was due to a screw up where I added a chapter to the wrong story. D'Oh! Sorry about that. The next chapter shouldn't be too, too long/ But I can't say for sure. Tahnbks again for reading and reviewing. |
| always angel |
11/14/05 - 11:56PM |
24: 21. Compartmentalize |
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I have a dad like Hank and I know that if he suddenly showed up wanting forgiveness I wouldn't grant it so easily. What I'm trying to get at is its good that you had Buffy be angry at Hank, if she forgave him just like that it wouldn't be realistic.
Author's Response: I think there's a nice contrast between Dawn, who wants Hank back in her life, and Buffy, who's had enough of Hank. I hope to have a little more drama next seaosn. Profvided, of course, that there is one. |
| axel |
11/14/05 - 11:53AM |
24: 21. Compartmentalize |
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"Slayers are girls, do I look like a girl to you?" "Kinda yeah." poor Connor, at least Dawn knows he's a guy. And where's Hank been? I always said, if a man doesn't take care of his family, he ain't a man, so he better have a good explaintion. Good chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Glad you liked the girly jokes. Making fun of poor Connor is just too easy sometimes. Hank doesn't have a good explanation for past deeds, but he does have promises about the future. We'll see how they turn out. |
| Vamp19762000 |
11/14/05 - 02:16AM |
24: 21. Compartmentalize |
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I totally get why Buffy's mad. It's justified. I had a dad like that. That's just something you don't just get over, maybe never and it can make you have a lot of trust issues. If she just gets over it right away, it's not really realistic. On another not, now that Emily's gone I'm still waiting for Connor to get his head out of his ass and notice Dawn.
Author's Response: Connor noticed Dawn in the first chapter at Full Moon on the Quad. (That's a real Stanford tradition, by the way). And dating your dead girlfriend's roommate . . . that's gotta be tricky. Angry Buffy will be aorund for a little while but, as I've said before, it's not her story. Hope you enjoy. Only one more chapter to go for "season one." As for season two, not sure what I'm goingt o do. I'm not wild about the obligation of writing 22 more chapters. Then again, I left a lot of loose ends in this "season." Thanks again for reading and for revieiwing. Both are greatly appreciated. |
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