Reviews for Campus Life
| Revello1620 |
01/24/05 - 12:06AM |
13: 10. Unnatural |
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i loved this chapter:)
Author's Response: Thanks! Hopefully you'll like the rest as well. |
| Appomattoxco |
01/16/05 - 10:21PM |
1: Full Moon on the Quad |
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Not my favorite ship Connor/Dawn or even favorite characters but this is so well written I'm going to have to give it a read.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Hopefully you’ll like the rest of the story. I’m trying to make it more “A Buffy version of college” than a Connor/Dawn ‘ship fic. So, you may yet enjoy it. Thanks again. |
| crayonbreaky gal |
01/14/05 - 04:32PM |
13: 10. Unnatural |
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Exposition is the name of the game. If you don't have it, the story falls apart. You needed this chapter to move the story along. We had to know some things as the reader, so you offered it up in conversations. Not too shabby. Kennedy sure wasn't being nice to Willow. I'm not sure why she puts up with it myself. I can see why Connor would be upset about what he did. He should be. And his talk with Angel? That's what needed to happen. I can't wait to see what he tells Angel, and what he asks for advice on. Could make Angel feel really uncomfortable. Could be really funny in places too.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I’m glad you liked it. I hope it wasn’t all just exposition. Although there was a lot of background, I hope there was also enough conflict to keep the story interesting. I don’t know that I’m actually going to show Connor’s conversation with Angel. I think Connor getting there (being able to talk to Angel about his problems) was the important part. But who knows? If I put together a good Connor/ Angel conversation, I’ll probably want to share it. |
| frenchtoast101 |
01/14/05 - 06:22AM |
13: 10. Unnatural |
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Yay! Another great chapter. Its nice to see Connor and Emily back together...But I still feel bad for Dawn. Plz update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. It's nice to see you think it's nice to see Connor and EMily back together. I have a soft spot for those two kids. I'm also glad the all drama chapter didn't scare you off. |
| TheChosen2_5x5 |
01/02/05 - 10:46PM |
11: 9. Waking Up Is Hard to Do |
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i amTotally loving that Connor kissed Willow! howevery i am totally hating this emily chick lol no reason just i always thought after connor changed u know good lol that he and dawn should hook up im weird witness me being weird nice work though keep it up!
Author's Response: Thanks fotr the review. I'm happy you like the story, but sad that everyone hates poor Emily. Every fic with Connor and Dawn (including another one of mine) has them getting paired up. I'm really trying to go another direction in this stroy. At least for a while. Hope you keep reading and enjoying! Thanks again! |
| AngelGrl |
12/21/04 - 07:18PM |
1: Full Moon on the Quad |
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Just read the latest chapter! I really like the fic!
Author's Response: I'm so happy to read that you like the fic. I'll try to keep it interesting. |
| Psyche2 |
12/19/04 - 07:46PM |
11: 9. Waking Up Is Hard to Do |
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I love this story! Please Continue!
Author's Response: The story will definitely go on. I'm not sure how much time I'llhave, so it might go on at a slow pace. But it will go on. |
| crayonbreaky gal |
12/17/04 - 08:03PM |
11: 9. Waking Up Is Hard to Do |
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Totally loving that Connor kissed Willow! That was so him. And Willow's reaction was hilarious. The dream sequences were really great. Dawn's were funny and so Dawn. At first I thought that Connor really had staked Angel, it seemed so real. And I thought that Emily had lost it and killed her family. You are tying all of this together so well. Really great job. Look forward to reading more.
Author's Response: I think kissing Willow is the sort of thing that Connor would do in a dream. I’m glad I duped you with Connor and Emily’s dream. Hopefully I can *keep* everything together long enough to finish this story. I look forward to writing more, so I’m glad you’ll want to read it. |
| Vamp_Grlz |
12/17/04 - 07:26PM |
11: 9. Waking Up Is Hard to Do |
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Wow! This chapter was SO interesting!!! I was freaking out when Connor staked Angel at first. And I liked the thing with Connor kissing Willow and his thing for older women. Are you going to include that later in the story? I Can't wait till the update!! Wow! =)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad to see I got a few people with the Angel-staking. You'll have to keep reading to see if there's any fallout from the Willow kiss. |
| Michael J |
12/17/04 - 03:21PM |
11: 9. Waking Up Is Hard to Do |
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You had me hook, line, and sinker. It didn't click until the fight with Angel started that Connor was dreaming. Same thing with Emily. It could've been easy to have Emily kill her family, but just the knowledge that she could kill them will be enough to do things to her psychologically. She also shares my opinion of Dawn. The line about everyone needing to be miserable because she can't get the guy she wanted was spot on. That's exactly how I feel. Surprisingly, I really liked Kennedy in this. For all the crap that the character gets, she was tailor made for this mission. Buffy, Impulse Queen of the Universe, would've smashed the candles on sight. I also truly hate you for that cliffhanger at the end. I'm dying to read that conversation in the next. Also looking forward to more of Steven Radinsky. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Glad to hear I hooked you. I’m not sure Emily’s opinion of Dawn (or yours) is completely accurate. She never asked Emily to break up with Connor. Dawn also told Emily to get back together with Connor. In fact, she’s the first person who’s said that Emily’s solution is one in which *everyone* winds up sad. I’m glad to hear you like Kennedy. I never really had anything against her and she did a pretty good job in this chapter. Sorry you hate me for the cliffhanger. Hopefully I’ll make it up to you by having more Steven Radinsky. Thanks for the review! |
| Revello1620 |
12/17/04 - 04:08AM |
11: 9. Waking Up Is Hard to Do |
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This was great!!! I totally loved Connor's dream make-out with Will, thinking that if she was there she was part of the dream! This whole episode reminded me of the BTVS episode you alluded to through Xander...the one with the first slayer and the cheese! GREAT UPDATE...see I put it all in caps so you would know how brilliant it was:)
Author's Response: Yeah, Connor still has a thing for the older women. I was trying to keep the dreams serious until the readers knew it was a dream. Then, I tried to make it surreal. Dawn's dream was pretty much pure fluff, but Connor’s and Emily’s dealt with internal issues that will resonate in the next few chapters. Or at least I hope so. “Restless” (The Buffy ep with the first slayer and the cheese) is one of my favorites, if not my abosolute favorite. And, despite what Joss has said in interviews, I think the cheese man was expressing something of significance to the struggle being acted out in each person’s dream. I wish I could have done something that good. But, alas, this is all you get. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks! |
| rockangelz25 |
12/14/04 - 05:32PM |
1: Full Moon on the Quad |
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You're right... Emily probably isn't much weaker than the average college freshman... But she seems weak in comparison to the characters that we always read about here--which does make sense, because she's new to this whole thing. Also, I'm a big fan of the Connor/Dawn concept, and not a big fan of the "interloper". As a character in general, though, you're right--she isn't that bad.
Author's Response: LOL- sorry for the interloper. Just keep telling yourself that if something is meant to be, nothing can stop it. Except an evil author of course. Ha Ha Ha Ha. Keep reading. |
| rockangelz25 |
12/13/04 - 06:27PM |
1: Full Moon on the Quad |
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This is a great story in general... I think that Emily's kind of a weak character, though. But I was very relieved to discover that the big sequence with Dawn going to her dormitory and finding Emily and Connor together was just a dream. I LOVE this, please add more soon--same goes for Running on Faith! (The loving and the pleading for adding, obviously not the Emily commentary.)
Author's Response: Thanks. When you say Emily's weak, do you mean weak as in undeveloped (by me) or that she's a weak person? If you mean the latter, I don't think she's a weak person. I don't imagine her as being any weaker than the average college freshman. In comparison to the super-hero gang she runs with, she's a bit less confident, yeah. But compared to normal people her age, I think she's normal. I'm hoping ot update soon, but I've been busy so far. Next week I should have a bit more time. Thanks again for the review. I'm glad you're enjoying. |
| AngelGrl |
12/07/04 - 11:23PM |
1: Full Moon on the Quad |
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Hi! My name is AngelGrl and I wanted to say I love this fic! Connor is so cool! Your a really good writer!
Author's Response: Hey, thanks! Keep reading, because there's plenty more cool characters. |
| Vamp_Grlz |
12/06/04 - 06:22AM |
12: 9. Waking Up Is Hard to Do (PG-13) |
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Hi!! Love the chapter. Dawn's dream had me scared to death for her. I'm glad it was just a dream. Plz update soon!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I'm doing 1 or 2 chapters of RoF season 2 before I get another of these up. |
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