Reviews for Running on Faith, Season Two
| IllyriaFan |
11/25/04 - 02:35PM |
1: 2.01: The New Regime |
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Hi! I've read all of first season and loved it and I am glad you did a second season! I cant wait till chapter 5!
Author's Response: I'm so happy to hear you loved it. Chapter 5 should be coming soon! |
| crayonbreaky gal |
11/08/04 - 02:51PM |
1: 2.01: The New Regime |
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Yay, second season. Love the Faith dialogue. And I like it that you have Xander in the mix too. Makes it more exciting when you have different people involved. And no Spike/Faith love yet? What is their problem. Spike should be so over Buffy. And Robin was a jerk. Put them together. I know, I know. You have to make it dramatic. I really like their pairing. Please develop the new character a little more too.
Author's Response: Yes, I do have to make the hook ups dramatic, although, to me, they seem inevitable. I have a few ideas for some road blocks to keep you all squirming. However, early feedback (and thank you guys for giving it to me) has led me to push back a plot line, move up another, and keep some characters in the story. So the next chapter might take a little while as I rework a few things. Don't worry. Gretchen will develop. |
| jords |
11/05/04 - 11:31PM |
1: 2.01: The New Regime |
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First off, a big Wahoo! for an update! **Insert cut of celebratory kazoo band here.**
Secondly, a big "Ha!" for making the update so darned funny.
ie. "Spike charged in, sword ready, and ran hard for the demons pinning Faith down. “Get the hell away from her you . . . actually, don’t know what you are. Never seen you lot before. New here?”
“Too much talkie,” a demon said, slapping Spike across the room.
**rofl** this is the sort of witty 'in your face' banter I so much love and miss from Mutant Enemy. Kudos to you for being able to write it so well.
Buffy's return to Rome has left me semi-reeling. Please tell me you won't leave it that way. I need to know she's going to face up to her mistakes and learn from them. Or at least not repeat them.
Lastly, Xander working with Faith has to be one of the best ideas I've read to date. Despite the sexual frisson between them, they really do work well off one another. I look forward to reading more of their adventures soon!
Keep up the good work, and as always, thanks so much for sharing!
~j
Author's Response: Buffy will probably be dealt with, but not for a while. Soooo much will happen between now and then. I'm glad Xander was a welcome addition. |
| seerborn |
11/04/04 - 08:49PM |
1: 2.01: The New Regime |
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hello...finally able to review hehehehe
anyway, loved that you've posted the sequel to running on faith.
i like this chapter...the action was well planned.not too "action-pack" executioner type but the way you described each fight helps the imagination to really see..
i love the humor again...xander, spike and faith. gretch being a clutz..a little airhead...good one.especially when faith, spike and xander simultaneously warned her not to do anything..
and for the subtle hints of Connor and what happened on the first story..leaves readers for more..but the underlying "secret" athmosphere helps thicken the plot in some ways..Xander not knowing about them...sure sparks alot of interest.
cant wait to read more..and thanks by the way
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I hope season two live sup to people’s hopes, expectations, etc. I was trying to work a balance between the action and the humor, so I hope I hit it. So, you’re welcome. And thank you. |
| Monkey Pants |
11/04/04 - 05:28PM |
1: 2.01: The New Regime |
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It's great that you've finally managed to put up a second season of this interesting series! I particulary like the interaction between Faith and Xander in this episode, they're fun characters to see together, and you write them well. Looking forward to your next chapter! :-)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Prepping the second season took longer than expected and there’ll be some re-tooling based on the reviews, so who knows how long until I get the next chapter out. Hope you’re still interested when I finally crank it out. |
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