Reviews for Running on Faith, Season Two
| twinblade |
12/01/05 - 09:10AM |
22: 2.22: Illyria |
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Dr. Kevin TAM... I've read all of this and Just Today Got That. Grrrr Argh. Well done , by the way.
Author's Response: Actually,I can't remember anyone mentioning that to me- getting the Dr. Tam reference. Thanks so much for the review. I'm glad you've been reading. |
| spideygirl |
11/30/05 - 03:54AM |
22: 2.22: Illyria |
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I couldn't stop laughing where first Dawn was so pissed off with Connor, then after she informed Connor about his baby, she asked Faith to babysit Anna for 2 hrs because she wants to have sex with Connor. LOL!! I couldn't stop laughing!!
I love these 2 parts the most:
*Connor stood and set Anna in her crib. She began to cry, but Connor caressed her head and whispered to her. “I just need to do some things for us, Anna. It’ll only be a minute.”
*Connor dropped down onto both of his knees. He reached into his pocket and pulled out the case. Dawn’s heart jumped form the pit of her stomach to the top of her throat and she could only squeak. Connor opened the box. Dawn began weeping from the sentiment alone. The beauty of the ring didn’t help.*
So Sweet !!
Author's Response: Poor Dawn is emotional these days. As for the proposal, I wanted it to be a sweet moment. On an unrelated issue, I'm watching "Melrose Place" and a cult leader is telling a really boring story. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story when I get it up and posted. |
| Peaches Girl |
11/29/05 - 10:38PM |
22: 2.22: Illyria |
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Great chapter. I love the part were Angel says 'what is it with you and evil guys' very cool line. Anyway, cant wait to see where is goes from here.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. But seriously, what IS it with Buffy and evil guys?! |
| always angel |
11/29/05 - 01:59AM |
22: 2.22: Illyria |
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Great chapter. I like that Connor and Dawn are getting married and I really like that Buffy killed the Immortal. But what happened to Angel?
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. If you're psyched about Connor and Dawn, be sure to read the next chaptewr when I post it. As for Angel . . . well, read the nexty chapter for him as well. |
| axel |
11/29/05 - 01:57AM |
22: 2.22: Illyria |
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Great chapter!It could have been the season finnaly (though I hope it's not) And I'm glad Connor, and Dawn got together. Glad Kennedy got better (though I think even a slayer couldn't get better that ffast, from brain damage!) Anyway good job.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Nope,m not the finally. I was planning to save htis for episode 22 (which will be the finally), but ran out of things to put betwen here and there. Now I have to move up my season three material and, well, probably end htis thing after ttwo seasons. And yeah, kiennedy healed quickly, but I was going to use her in the fight. Then I didn't. |
| dutchgirl |
11/20/05 - 09:05AM |
20: 2.20: Our People |
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Angel and Drusilla to the rescue!! I just wanted to say that Lorne and me are were very happy it’s a healty baby girl and not another Yasmine!! And Faith I really hope things will work out for her!! Sometimes you need to talk even if it’s just a little, but that’s not something Faith can easily do.
I also wanted to comment on two things earlier in the show:
1.The sex-talk, hilarious!! That was just damn funny condoms/condors ^^ !
2. And Faith giving Connor advice about how to handle things with Dawn while fighting demons I could really imagine them doing just that and although this is somewhat a serious conversation the situation makes it very funny!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. I'm glad you're happy about the healthy delivery. Well, more or less. Faith isn't someone who talks easily, so it'll be a bumpy road for her, emotionally speaking. Glad you liked the condors talk. All things considered, it's extremely relevant. I also thought the fighting whjile talking about relationships is the sort of thing they'd do on the show, so I'm gla dyou liked that, too. Thanks again for reviewing. I hope you continue to enjoy. |
| Nezzi |
11/16/05 - 11:22AM |
1: 2.01: The New Regime |
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I'm a little late, but i just got finished reading Season One and you've already gotten off to a great start in season two. You might want to proof read a little more... but the characters are believable and the plots are interesting and enjoyable. Keep up the fantastical work. Thanx!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm sorry to say that I don't proof read at all. I should probably get a Beta. Wanna volunteer? Anyway, glad you like the plots. I hope to keep 'em coming. |
| spideygirl |
11/16/05 - 09:53AM |
20: 2.20: Our People |
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Why is Connor searching for Illyria, sorry I'm a bit blur this part. I thought Illyria fights for the good side, she's not fighting for the bad side, is she?? Ooh Drusilla, I like it when she comes out. She has that kind of crazy character. Finally, Angel has found Connor again and he is going to bring him home. I'm sure Connor will be happy to hear the good news about Dawn.
Author's Response: Illyria's evil. SOrry to have to be the one to tell you. This goes back to Lorne's vision in season one (of "Running on Faith") that Illyria would lead a hell army and Connor would be the one to stop her. He tracked her down through the Markovics. (She was the one who hired them to take out the slayers). Thanks for reading and reviewing. |
| Vamp19762000 |
11/14/05 - 02:20AM |
1: 2.01: The New Regime |
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Can't wait to see what happens next - the baby, Connor and Dawn, Dru. Please update soon.
Author's Response: I hope to update again soon. Thasnks for reading. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. |
| Buffymanic |
11/12/05 - 03:17PM |
20: 2.20: Our People |
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This is gret I;m really captivated by your writing and characterisation. This is definately one interesting tale with many high's and lows. I can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. The next chapter should be a bit of a high, but there will be more lows to come, of course. Thanks again for the review! |
| Peaches Girl |
11/11/05 - 11:29PM |
20: 2.20: Our People |
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I love this chapter. Hopefully Dawn will find Connor and tell him he is a daddy. Angel saves his son again, how sweet. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I hope I'm not spoiling anything when I say that yes, Dawn will get to tell Connor he's a father. Again. I'll keep up the writing if you keep reading. Tahnks again. |
| always angel |
11/11/05 - 01:11AM |
20: 2.20: Our People |
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" You seem too uptight for Stanford." I loved that line! And I liked how Spike scattered the crowd. I hope Kennedy is ok for Willow's sake. Update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Hopefully you'll enjoy the next chapter just as much. |
| rockangelz25 |
11/10/05 - 09:32PM |
1: 2.01: The New Regime |
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Dawn's baby is normal! (Which is nice.) And the bit she said about Connor and only Connor being down there was kind of sweet.
And the ending was great. It was surprising--I figured Drusilla was coming along to work her old, "I have an incestuous desire for Connor." But, no! She was doing it for Angel! That's so sweet!
I loved it. Another awesome chapter. More soon, please?
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Hey . . . who said the baby was normal? Yep, Connor's still the only one to have been "down there." As for Dru, she has a twisted sense of family. Yes, there should be more soon. Thanks again. |
| axel |
11/10/05 - 07:50PM |
20: 2.20: Our People |
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So Faith likes to be the one that's shoving the (well you know) I think that may say something about her. Poor Kennedy, I hope she gets better (HEY! who threw that rock?) But you really don't get better from that, unless your a Slayer, maybe? Illirya is the villian hu? I never really bought that an evil Hell God would suddenly be good, anyway. Great as always, keep it up.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Yeah, I figured I'd run with Faith's sexual proclivities a little bit. Faith was only out for hlaf a season when she fell off a roof. I'm sure Kennedy will pull through at some pint or another. Thanks again. |
| Timan |
09/05/05 - 08:42AM |
1: 2.01: The New Regime |
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that was great! can't wait to read more. the leads are true to the series and i love the idea of the clumbsy witch
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. |
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