Reviews for Running on Faith, Season Two
| Skyler Fox |
06/08/06 - 08:05PM |
22: 2.22: Illyria |
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You covinced Axel to write? DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA WHAT HE'S PUT ME THROUGH? AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: No. I actually have no idea what he's put you through. |
| axel |
06/07/06 - 10:34PM |
22: 2.22: Illyria |
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Ok uh, it looks the same. I unless you added chapters in the middle, or something. Please explain. Anyway if this is the end, as you've said you wanted to end it on two(Though I hope you don't end on a cliffhanger like that) . I'll miss it, since this was the first story I ever read here, and it's what motivated me to try writing (So everyone knows who to blame) 2.
Author's Response: Wow- I’m so glad to hear my writing motivated you. (notice me focusing on the positive). This pretty much is the same. I split five very long chapters in half to up the chapter total to 22. Thus, the very unceremonious end of season 2. Sorry. Although I don’t know when I’ll start it (probably about the same time as Campus Life season 2), there will be a third season of Running on Faith. I have enough plot ideas for at least a third season and *possibly* a fourth. Thanks again for reading. |
| Quortoth |
03/24/06 - 09:27PM |
15: 2.15: Everyone Breaks |
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Xander kicked it. That was funny, then Spike said it was fun looking. Cordelia, eek. Great story. I'm excited.
Author's Response: Glad you liked the story. Thanks so much for reviewing. |
| Quortoth |
03/24/06 - 09:14PM |
14: 2.14: The Condors and the Bees |
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"Sing it on the mountain, brother."
That wasn't even the funniest part. Wow, that whole sex talk, whoa. It was hillarious. I thought it was great, wweee!! Great work there. Great.
Author's Response: I always worry that humor won't come off in writing, so I'm glad the sex talk was funny. I'd been waiting to write that for at least a year before I actually worked it into the story. |
| Quortoth |
03/18/06 - 10:01AM |
13: 2.13: The Founder of the Initiative |
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Owe. I like that chapter a lot, got the suspense, the violence. I was listening to music while I read, that was great. Fast stuff going on, very effective. Great Chapter.
Author's Response: It's been a while since my last big action sequence, so I wanted to open with one. Let me know what you were listening to so I can recommend it to other readers :) |
| Quortoth |
03/15/06 - 06:18PM |
11: 2.11: Surrender |
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Great story. I like how Spike is all sort of parental, "I'm goanna kill him" attitude. And the Weetabix, that's always funny to hear and I wonder what's going to happen with the Graham/ Intiative stuff. I'm excited. Great story.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I try to walk a line between dram/romance and action/suspense. I'm glad this chapter seems to have done that. |
| Quortoth |
03/13/06 - 03:34PM |
9: 2.09: Old Loves |
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I liked that episode a lot, Conner talks a lot during sex. :-) [I'm laughing right now.] I like the romance and want to know what happens next between them. Great one.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like the romantic aspects. Connor is still pretty inexperienced with women and sex, so he's constantly questioning himself in that, and ever other human interaction. |
| Quortoth |
03/09/06 - 07:07PM |
7: 2.07: Retaliation, Counter-retaliation |
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That was a great story. I have that Anne Rice book 'Blood & Gold.' Just recently read it. I love reading Anne Rice. I've read 13 of her books since August. [I'm just saying.]
I loved that scene between Dawn and Conner, then the soap, but that scene. I don't know if the word Suspense worked but that scene was great. I was waiting for him to kiss her. :-)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I've actually never read *Blood & Gold*, but thought it worked with the story. I was definitely going for a suspense/ anguish/ will they or won't they kiss kind of thing. I'm so glad you felt that. Thanks again. |
| Quortoth |
03/04/06 - 09:43AM |
6: 2.06: Taking an Initiative |
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I much enjoyed that episod. There was the suspense and I'm really wondering what'll happen next. And I like when Lorne said, "Holy mother of Rambo." :-P
Author's Response: I thought that would be a Lorne thing to say. Thanks for the review! |
| SakuraSyaoran4eva |
03/03/06 - 11:13PM |
22: 2.22: Illyria |
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I really like this fic - really hope there will be an update soon. Most action fics put me to sleep cuz I can never figure out what's going on and have an inclination to skip anything with the word "fight" or "sword" in it, but I really enjoyed this.
Anna's cute little "floating" thing is adorable. Kinda thought her name was Anya @ first...can't wait to see Buffy, Angel and Spike reaction to the baby and the impending wedding.
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PS. Hate to say this but - do you have ANY idea at all how many spelling and typo mistakes you've made in the last chapter alone? I came across this one time where I THINK lorne was shuddering but you wrote shuttering - and I have no idea if you meant what you wrote or whether it was a typo. Will see if I can find where it was and get back to you.
Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the review. It’s always great to hear from another reader. I’m glad you like the action and the floating stuffed animals. Hopefully Anna will remain adorable and not be eaten by anything. As for reactions to the wedding, yep, that should be interesting. As for getting a beta, I’ve had a few already and they never last for one reason or another. One reason is that people often e-mail me, anxious for another chapter. I often feel a little pressure to get stories up quickly, so I don’t really like waiting a week to get my stuff back from a beta. Also, I tend to write in spurts that leave betas struggling to catch up. Now, of course, I have your complaint about typos. I would be very frustrated by it all if I took it this seriously. As it stands, however, this is essentially a leisure activity for me, so I do my best not to get annoyed. For the most part, a group of writers with whom I’m familiar read my work and I read theirs. When we notice typos, etc., we e-mail each other off list to let each other know. You can feel free to do that, or to post reviews mentioning the typos. But if you want everything clean before it goes up, you might want to skip my stories. That would make me a little sad, because I do want all the world to read and love my work. However, I don’t imagine I’ll be able to find another beta anytime soon. Thanks again for the review and for the suggestion. Let me know if you find the Lorne shudders line. |
| Quortoth |
03/03/06 - 01:13AM |
4: 2.04: Truce |
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I loved that one. Conner getting Help from Faith, Conner not knowing stuff. And Dru, bad. Shame on her. :-P
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I hope the rest of the story is just as enjoyable for you. |
| Quortoth |
02/18/06 - 06:25PM |
3: 2.03: But It’s All Very Tastefully Done |
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I enjoyed that one. I loved it, Lorne and his seabreeze, Lorne is his great old self through the writing. Cool. And that seen between Dawn and Conner about the spell, that was so good that almost liked the idea of them having a relationship. [I was never a Dawn/Conner fan, but I think you'll get me to change my mind.]
Author's Response: Yeah, Lorne will be Lorne. That's for sure. I'm glad you found the scene between Connor and Dawn to be romantic. I hope weird romances don't turn you off too much as I'll probably have a few of them. |
| Quortoth |
02/12/06 - 01:23PM |
2: 2.02: Tomorrow Belongs to . . . |
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Another great chapter, I didn't expect Conner and Angel to ever go fishing :-P. I like how Conner fishes. And then eating the raw fish, great, weird, but great.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Yeah, I kind of like to play up the "fich out of water" aspect with Connor. Angel trying to do normal father/son things and Connor not understanding them. I thik there's a lot of untapped comic potential there. |
| Quortoth |
02/11/06 - 07:40PM |
1: 2.01: The New Regime |
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That show was great, beautiful. lol. I'm loving Gretchen, she's great. Dropping the candle. Spike casual, "I don't know why you're still surprised?" I'm loving it. Oh, and I didn't expect Xander to tell Spike he had to ride in the trunk. That was hillarious.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I thought Gretchen would be a neat, comic relief type character. As always, thanks for the reviews. |
| morbidnagel641 |
12/01/05 - 12:16PM |
14: 2.14: The Condors and the Bees |
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I love it. 'the-birds-and-the-bees' part cracked me up! You portrayed Lorne perfectly... "Hold this silly severed head of mine up to your sweet cheek, sweet cheeks" I love the way Connor senses Angel's presence.
Author's Response: I thought the "birds and bees" scene had the potential to be comic gold, so I'm glad I got a few laughs out of it. I'm also glad I got Lorne down. I always worry he's one of my weaker characters. Thanks so much for the review. I'm so psyched that you're enjoying the story. |
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