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Reviews for The Scooby Gang




Fred 07/16/05 - 12:52AM 1: The Scooby Gang Signed
Loved how eachof the scobbies reacted to the other scoobys and how the other scoobys didn't beleive in vampires!

Author's Response: Thanks. When I first wrote this, I wasn't really that happy with it, but it's grown on me over time and is now one of my favorites.

Poison Pen 10/31/04 - 12:46PM 1: The Scooby Gang Signed
Happy to! repetition of the climax moments: (and I know damn well this is all going to run together when it appears in the review text, and for that I apologize, but I’m hoping it’ll still answer your question) Before anyone could respond, a cold chill ran through the room. An eerie voice resonated through the building. "Leave now. This is your only warning!" --------------------------------------------- Before anyone could respond, a cold chill ran through the room. An eerie voice resonated through the building. "Leave now. This is your only warning!" Velma reached down and started scratching Roxy behind the ears. "I can answer that." Everyone gasped as she grabbed Roxy's neck and started pulling the skin over the dog's ears. The gasps from two of the group intensified when the mask was pulled away to show who was in the dog costume. Someone sputtered. "That's...that's..." ------------------------------------------------- Velma reached down and started scratching Roxy behind the ears. "I can answer that." Everyone gasped as she grabbed Roxy's neck and started pulling the skin over the dog's ears. The gasps from two of the group intensified when the mask was pulled away to show who was in the dog costume. Someone sputtered. "That's...that's..." (Hi, me again—anyway, it’s just like the cartoon—you know, the repetition of a “Ohh!” moment after the strategic commercial break (you know, you could take that a whole step further and have one of the characters break into a completely off the wall monolog about Nestle Quik or something, lol, just a thought) I thought it was that extra touch that means so much. Made me grin. Hope that clarifies! Always happy to chat about a story. Feel free to email.—kori)

Author's Response: Oh. lol Let me tell you why it looked like that. When SFA wasn't accepting any new subissions (before Rave took over) and Quennie was still the owner... It turned into a mailing list. This story was submitted in 3 different installments over a month's time. The recap was just a was of reminding people what had happened "Previously on Buffy." Thanks for pointing that out.

Poison Pen 10/31/04 - 01:35AM 1: The Scooby Gang Signed
Hey, you're good! Joss should hire you. This was hilarious. I especially loved the end (though you should probably fix the line 'when I was assigned as your slayer'--no worries, I knew what you meant--just thought you'd wanna know). That, and the repetition of the climax moments. Couldn't stop grinning. Looking forward to reading the rest of your stories.

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. Can you tel me what you mean by the repition of the climax moments?






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