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sugarmouse 04/08/06 - 04:39PM 1: Will Power Signed
the stuff with tara couldn't of actually happened because the bullet whent straight through her heart, killing her instantly, but i suppose you may have wriiten it so it didn't pierce her heart.......... Anyway, altogether i thought it was a very good piece of writing, i found it intresting! Well done :-)

Author's Response: It was alternate universe. Maybe I forgot to mark it as such. As for Tara dying outright, as a paramedic, I can tell you that it is possible for someone to survive that type of wound. It would be difficult, but they could survive if they received immediate emergency medical care. Thanks for the feedback though!

Monkey Pants 10/30/04 - 08:02PM 1: Will Power Signed
It was okay, but I don't think Dawn was in the house that day. Plus, Xander would still have gotten help for Buffy, regardless of what Willow did. Although, truthfully, she may have died in hospital. The onley other problem was the fact that tara dies in the episode outright, as the shot went through her heart. That's the sadness of it. To make the AU credible, changes would have to be made to how and when Warren fired the gun, Willow's state of mind beforehand, etc, etc. i couldn't quite believe ithe fic as an alternate situation. Please note, however, that I'm only constructively criticising your fic, I'm not trying to be mean!!!

Author's Response: It was alternate universe. Maybe I forgot to mark it as such. As for Tara dying outright, as a paramedic, I can tell you that it is possible for someone to survive that type of wound. It would be difficult, but they could survive if they received immediate emergency medical care. Thanks for the feedback though!

adancer 10/30/04 - 04:43AM 1: Will Power Signed
LOVED IT! I love the spin you put on it. I cryed a lil at the end...(oh god I'm so sad) anyway great
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