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filmtheory 11/10/04 - 11:42AM 6: Six Signed
I really like the story so far. The Doctor being Dr. Marsters was a hoot, especially considering his physical description. I was sad that Spike was with Buffy, but happy Angel went to Nina. Angel and Buffy seemed over to me since he left Sunnydale. I'm a little confused why Angel didn't want to be near Connor. I think Connor was right on the money when he said Angel should treat this as a blessing, not a curse. Then again, Angel does have a long history of pushing his son away, so maybe that makes sense. One small thing- you keep switching between spellings of Connor's name (Connor and Conner). For the record, it is spelled Connor, at least according to the Angel box sets and imdb. I cna't wait to read the rest. This looks very cool.

Author's Response: Thanks for pointing out the faux pas with Connor's name. I'll be sure to go back and fix that soon. Your confusion as to why Angel's pushing Connor away is confusing to me, so don't have an answer for you there--sorry. :) I also get the feeling, considering your position on Angel and Buffy, that you're not gonna love the end, lol. But I hope you'll finish the story anyway--because I appreciate the feedback. And if you have any ideas on how I might make Angel's reasons for staying away from Connor more clear, I'd love to hear them. Always looking to improve! Thanks for your review, filmtheory! P.S.--again, looking way forward to reading more of Campus Life.
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