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Reviews for Chocolate Chip Shanshu




Andy 06/09/05 - 11:21PM 11: Eleven Signed
Finally! I've been browsing around the site ALL DAY to find some decent post-NFA fic, and yours is the best one so far! Spike is amusing :D Angel is cute, if a little bit soft - crying? Buffy is awesome - "shut up and make love to me" - brilliant.

Icequeen 03/19/05 - 05:38PM 11: Eleven Signed
i loved the whole spike even though buffy doesnt love him he still sticks up for her. loved the interaction with angel and spike...and the ending lines were really awsome, loved it!

Icequeen 03/19/05 - 05:15PM 4: Four Signed
beavis and butthead....pink flip-flops...the imagine alone makes me piss my pants

Icequeen 03/19/05 - 05:11PM 2: Two Signed
Dr. Marsters..........left me shocked..cant wait to see what happens!!!

Marie Nomad 01/01/05 - 09:23PM 11: Eleven Signed
Finally! Angel and Buffy meet up! Oy! Angel really took his time and it took Nina booting him out to prove it. LOL I can understand poor Angel working at a gas station, I mean, he really don't have much identification. Great job.

Revello1620 11/29/04 - 10:51AM 1: One Signed
I printed this out to read and I couldn't wait for the last page! I really enjoyed the Cordy/Wes Oracle banter!! A very entertaining read..I mean you had Angel working at gass station!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. It's a bit hokey, a tad sappy, and more than a little fluffy, but I had fun inflicting little tortures on Angel. :)

filmtheory 11/10/04 - 05:01PM 8: Eight Signed
Angel, yo usick, sick stalker. Short chapter, but very good. I love Buffy suspecting it's Angel. If they're really soul mates, she should know, right?

Author's Response: Wow. Thanks for all the great feedback. I'm glad you liked the end--I figured you'd probably be groaning, lol. Nina--I think she's an interesting character who deserves better than to be someone's second choice--though I'm playing with some story ideas where she's not. That combo interests me, too. Thanks again, filmtheory. Gonna head over to your moniker and see if there's any fresh Campus Life--glad to hear there's going to be 22 chapters!

filmtheory 11/10/04 - 05:00PM 11: Eleven Signed
And with that, the happy ending. For someone who's a fan of the show Angel, I think the character is a bit of an a** who, since he got his own show, didn't get called on his s*** half as much as he should have. So, it takes a heck of a writer to interest me in the story of his redemption/reward. Not only that but, in my opinion, you stayed true to what an a** Angel can be. Although inadvertent at first, he completely used Nina. I'm thinking maybe Angel kept Connor out of the picture because Angel often takes the easy way out. Explaining Connor to Buffy would be anything but easy. On the other hand, he gave his son a new life and he could just want to follow through on that. Angel and Buffy get back together and I'm happy about it. Well done!

filmtheory 11/10/04 - 04:51PM 10: Ten Signed
Nina dumping Angel was sad for me. Call me crazy, but I have a soft spot for those two kids. Still, I'm glad she stood up for herself. As for Cordy being an oracle- GENIUS!

filmtheory 11/10/04 - 11:42AM 6: Six Signed
I really like the story so far. The Doctor being Dr. Marsters was a hoot, especially considering his physical description. I was sad that Spike was with Buffy, but happy Angel went to Nina. Angel and Buffy seemed over to me since he left Sunnydale. I'm a little confused why Angel didn't want to be near Connor. I think Connor was right on the money when he said Angel should treat this as a blessing, not a curse. Then again, Angel does have a long history of pushing his son away, so maybe that makes sense. One small thing- you keep switching between spellings of Connor's name (Connor and Conner). For the record, it is spelled Connor, at least according to the Angel box sets and imdb. I cna't wait to read the rest. This looks very cool.

Author's Response: Thanks for pointing out the faux pas with Connor's name. I'll be sure to go back and fix that soon. Your confusion as to why Angel's pushing Connor away is confusing to me, so don't have an answer for you there--sorry. :) I also get the feeling, considering your position on Angel and Buffy, that you're not gonna love the end, lol. But I hope you'll finish the story anyway--because I appreciate the feedback. And if you have any ideas on how I might make Angel's reasons for staying away from Connor more clear, I'd love to hear them. Always looking to improve! Thanks for your review, filmtheory! P.S.--again, looking way forward to reading more of Campus Life.

Psyche2 11/07/04 - 04:45PM 11: Eleven Signed
Awesome!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! :)
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