Reviews for Dawn!
| Angel15 |
11/05/04 - 05:15PM |
1: Dawn! |
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| Wow,cool story!
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| Tomi Angel |
11/02/04 - 04:37AM |
1: Dawn! |
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ahhh cool. i luv poems. i've never seen one so far, but this is a rly gd one! great start of the story!!!
Author's Response: thnx
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| memarkw |
10/30/04 - 05:10AM |
1: Dawn! |
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You write very well, especially for a 13 yer old. I would suggest a beta-reader for little things that spell check might not catch. If you keep it up the way you're going, you're going to be a fantastic writer! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thank you very mucyh |
| Danielle_G |
10/14/04 - 08:15PM |
1: Dawn! |
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Hello! This story is a very very nice story! I like the idea of Andrew having feelings for Dawn. Can wait to read more!
Author's Response: thnk you
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| filmtheory |
10/12/04 - 06:28PM |
1: Dawn! |
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Nice poem. And I like the general idea for the story. Hope the other writers are as good as you.
Author's Response: Thnk you" |
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